My Body Will Be...

Raise your fists up high, slam them hard down low,
till u pound through the floor, into hades.
Becuz ladies, thats where im going. 
Im letting the beast have me,
 the blood on the floor will be my own, 
the tears that decend into puddles at my feet will be my love. 
and my blood will be wine,
 to show the never ending bitterness of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 23, 2010 at 12:57 PM
That's intense. I really loved that first line and then the rest didn't seem to flow well but still, I really like where you went with it. Nice write.
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