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My Body, This Shell Discarded

my mind carries me 
each day spent
through waves of wonder



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on June 23, 2018 for contest MAGICICADA 13 - BODY AND MIND  sponsored by MAUREEN McGREAVY  -  RANKED 2ND

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Susan Gentry

July 2, 2018 at 4:49 PM

Congratulations on your win. Truly inspired!

Line Gauthier

July 2, 2018 at 5:51 PM

Thank you, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Paul Callus

July 1, 2018 at 5:37 PM

An excellent entry, Line...and the title is the cherry on the cake! Congratulations on your fine podium finish. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

July 1, 2018 at 7:24 PM

Thank you so much, Paul. Most appreciated.

Paul Marc

July 1, 2018 at 4:40 PM

I agree with Nina - well said.

Line Gauthier

July 1, 2018 at 7:26 PM

Thank you, P.M., for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 1, 2018 at 3:00 PM

It resonates with me Line! Congratulations on your 2nd place finish! xomo

Line Gauthier

July 1, 2018 at 3:19 PM

Thank you, Maureen for the fun contest.

Andrea Dietrich

June 24, 2018 at 3:34 PM

a beauty here!

Line Gauthier

June 24, 2018 at 4:19 PM

Thanks, so happy this actually resonates with some people.

Janice Canerdy

June 24, 2018 at 7:53 AM

Excellent, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier

June 24, 2018 at 1:45 PM

Thank you so much, Janice.

Caren Krutsinger

June 24, 2018 at 1:12 AM

I am so glad because this is what we all strive to do, Line.

Line Gauthier

June 24, 2018 at 5:12 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Lyric Man

June 23, 2018 at 11:15 PM

I like the awe concept in this write!

Line Gauthier

June 23, 2018 at 11:46 PM

Thank you, LM. Most appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

June 23, 2018 at 6:50 PM

I especially like the second line...you spend your time...perhaps do not hold back!

Line Gauthier

June 23, 2018 at 11:09 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Kim. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose

June 23, 2018 at 6:28 PM

The mind can be a wonderful travelling companion if we allow it too. It takes us where the body can't go at times. Your poetry shines Line, thank you for sharing.

Line Gauthier

June 23, 2018 at 11:09 PM

Thank you, Pixie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Mick Talbot

June 23, 2018 at 4:33 PM

A kawanagi comment... .................................................................................... through of waves wonder... dolphins on a surfing curve... a breath of fresh air... ............................................................................ your mind carries you... your muse fills it with great thoughts... you write your words flow... ..................................................................... © Mick E Talbot 2018

Line Gauthier

June 23, 2018 at 11:10 PM

I am honored, Mick. Love your inspiration.

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