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My Body, This Shell Discarded

my mind carries me 
each day spent
through waves of wonder



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on June 23, 2018 for contest MAGICICADA 13 - BODY AND MIND  sponsored by MAUREEN McGREAVY  -  RANKED 2ND

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Susan Gentry Date: 7/2/2018 4:49:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Truly inspired! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/2/2018 5:51:00 PM Thank you, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Paul Callus Date: 7/1/2018 5:37:00 PM An excellent entry, Line...and the title is the cherry on the cake! Congratulations on your fine podium finish. Regards // paul Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/1/2018 7:24:00 PM Thank you so much, Paul. Most appreciated.

P.M. Richter Date: 7/1/2018 4:40:00 PM I agree with Nina - well said. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/1/2018 7:26:00 PM Thank you, P.M., for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 7/1/2018 3:00:00 PM It resonates with me Line! Congratulations on your 2nd place finish! xomo Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/1/2018 3:19:00 PM Thank you, Maureen for the fun contest.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/24/2018 3:34:00 PM a beauty here! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/24/2018 4:19:00 PM Thanks, so happy this actually resonates with some people.

Janice Canerdy Date: 6/24/2018 7:53:00 AM Excellent, Line! Janice Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/24/2018 1:45:00 PM Thank you so much, Janice.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/24/2018 1:12:00 AM I am so glad because this is what we all strive to do, Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/24/2018 5:12:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Lyric Man Date: 6/23/2018 11:15:00 PM I like the awe concept in this write! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/23/2018 11:46:00 PM Thank you, LM. Most appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/23/2018 6:50:00 PM I especially like the second line...you spend your time...perhaps do not hold back! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/23/2018 11:09:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit, Kim. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/23/2018 6:28:00 PM The mind can be a wonderful travelling companion if we allow it too. It takes us where the body can't go at times. Your poetry shines Line, thank you for sharing. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/23/2018 11:09:00 PM Thank you, Pixie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Mick Talbot Date: 6/23/2018 4:33:00 PM A kawanagi comment... .................................................................................... through of waves wonder... dolphins on a surfing curve... a breath of fresh air... ............................................................................ your mind carries you... your muse fills it with great thoughts... you write your words flow... ..................................................................... © Mick E Talbot 2018 Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/23/2018 11:10:00 PM I am honored, Mick. Love your inspiration.