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My Body, This Shell Discarded

my mind carries me each day spent through waves of wonder AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on June 23, 2018 for contest MAGICICADA 13 - BODY AND MIND sponsored by MAUREEN McGREAVY - RANKED 2ND

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/2/2018 4:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Truly inspired!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2018 5:51:00 PM

Thank you, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/1/2018 5:37:00 PM

An excellent entry, Line...and the title is the cherry on the cake! Congratulations on your fine podium finish. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/1/2018 7:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul. Most appreciated.

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/1/2018 4:40:00 PM

I agree with Nina - well said.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/1/2018 7:26:00 PM

Thank you, P.M., for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/1/2018 3:00:00 PM

It resonates with me Line! Congratulations on your 2nd place finish! xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/1/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen for the fun contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2018 3:34:00 PM

a beauty here!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2018 4:19:00 PM

Thanks, so happy this actually resonates with some people.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/24/2018 7:53:00 AM

Excellent, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2018 1:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/24/2018 1:12:00 AM

I am so glad because this is what we all strive to do, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2018 5:12:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/23/2018 11:15:00 PM

I like the awe concept in this write!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:46:00 PM

Thank you, LM. Most appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/23/2018 6:50:00 PM

I especially like the second line...you spend your time...perhaps do not hold back!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:09:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Kim. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/23/2018 6:28:00 PM

The mind can be a wonderful travelling companion if we allow it too. It takes us where the body can't go at times. Your poetry shines Line, thank you for sharing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:09:00 PM

Thank you, Pixie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/23/2018 4:33:00 PM

A kawanagi comment... .................................................................................... through of waves wonder... dolphins on a surfing curve... a breath of fresh air... ............................................................................ your mind carries you... your muse fills it with great thoughts... you write your words flow... ..................................................................... © Mick E Talbot 2018

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2018 11:10:00 PM

I am honored, Mick. Love your inspiration.