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My Body Doth Sag

Well sing hallelujah and hang out the flags My dentures are broken and my body doth sag Still a happy old pig Can still do the jig But lately having trouble some parts to wag

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2023 6:51:00 PM

I can see you waving the flag, smiling with broken dentures and jigging with a finger or toe. ;)

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2023 4:26:00 AM

Funny lady!!! Sweetie... maybe we could be a team? XOX

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/30/2023 7:55:00 PM

Hilarious, Jack! You have a great sense of humor! Blessings, Kim M

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2023 4:14:00 AM

Think I was born with it! Laughter is a bunch more fun... happy Thursday my love XOX

Sand Blown

Date: 8/30/2023 10:17:00 AM

...hahaaa....reflections me has...mustache over dentures and body doth sag....lost most of my hair....etza man....must have left the 'usual-time' auditorium.....i kid you not...'now-time' be beyond words andt it be a least of one other dimension .....i really hope to live at least another decade........stan

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2023 4:24:00 AM

Go for it my man! I'm aiming for 90 then who knows... 100! Naw maybe not!!! Who knows what state the world will be in :(