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My Body Betrays Me

There are nights where my body Is turned into stone; my body Betrays me once again The monsters in the shadows Crowd until they hover Forming your face again Just like the first time, I can’t scream My body betrays me And it hurts; just like the First time it happened I’m unable to move, my Traitorous body aches And all I hear is your Voice, telling me to take it And my body still betrays me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/9/2018 9:19:00 AM
Excellent piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. Post some more.
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Date: 2/6/2018 1:51:00 PM
i love the poem its really good.
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Date: 2/6/2018 1:01:00 PM
Excellent craft! I am awed! :) Welcome to Poetry Soup, A.D.! :O)
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Date: 2/6/2018 7:56:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Chilling first poem.
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Date: 2/6/2018 6:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your work. I look forward 2 reading more.
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Date: 1/30/2018 12:00:00 PM
A chilling eloquent penning! A fantastic read. Welcome to the soup :)
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Date: 1/30/2018 10:21:00 AM
Deep and personal first post AD.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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