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My Boat Sailed Away

My Boat sailed away dark clouds collided above the vast ocean waves hit strongly urged my boat sailed away from me led away precious treasure a special heart turbulence wind so powerful ready to roll the banner on a mast a white banner beautifully embroidered knitted with love my favorite boat sailed away vast oceans can’t be be measured strong expectation the captain remain victorious to guide my boat sailing safely develop the white banner embroidered with love till longing bring you back meet these eyes who never tired waiting for the boat carve the sea level and sail back ~ (c) Sukmawati Komala ~ 19 April 2013

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 7/31/2013 3:41:00 PM

I love to be beside the seaside! Sea love never die.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/24/2013 4:18:00 PM

awesome work ;} you have a blessed day .

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/24/2013 3:10:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely and thoughtful write. You boat will be getting back soon. Enjoyed. Tfs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2013 10:41:00 PM

oh my goodness. just seeing that Sara used two of the same adjectives that I used to describe your work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2013 10:40:00 PM

what a unique style of poetry you have. So thoughtful and elegant! Very creative.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2013 5:14:00 PM

Creative work and very unique..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/20/2013 4:55:00 PM

With such a captain, no fear is there! The voyage will be a rewarding adventure filled with love! Wonderful writing that fills the heart with warmth!

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/20/2013 9:59:00 AM

A wistful and lovely write, it makes me sigh to read it, but smile, too. Maybe that's strange, but I enjoy poems that stir emotional conflict

Daver Austin

Date: 4/20/2013 9:02:00 AM

Thanks for reading my work and taking the time to comment. Love your idea here, the sailing away of heart's concern. Love, daver

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/20/2013 8:58:00 AM

Your boat is not sailing away for ever, it is going to return bringing cheers!!

Len Gasun

Date: 4/20/2013 8:31:00 AM

Hello my dear sista SK!:))). Hope all is well. I'm so glad to stop by here tonight to read your excellent & unique write as always! I love the image here though it's quite sad; but the ending is great- it uplifts my spirit! I'm soo grateful for continuously sharing your gem to me & your precious time stopping by with your sweet & inspiring comments. Have a great weekend as well my dear! love and big hugs, Leonora