My Boat Sailed Away

My Boat sailed away

dark clouds collided
above the vast ocean
waves hit
strongly urged

my boat
sailed away from me
led away
precious treasure

a special heart

turbulence wind
so powerful
ready to roll
the banner on a mast

a white banner
beautifully embroidered
knitted with
love

my favorite boat
sailed away

vast oceans
can’t be
be measured

strong expectation
the captain
remain victorious 
to guide my boat
sailing safely

develop the white banner
embroidered with love
till longing bring you back

meet these eyes
who never tired
waiting for the boat

carve the sea level
and sail back

~ (c) Sukmawati Komala ~
19 April 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/31/2013 3:41:00 PM
I love to be beside the seaside! Sea love never die.
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Date: 4/24/2013 4:18:00 PM
awesome work ;} you have a blessed day .
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Date: 4/24/2013 3:10:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely and thoughtful write. You boat will be getting back soon. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 4/20/2013 10:41:00 PM
oh my goodness. just seeing that Sara used two of the same adjectives that I used to describe your work!!
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Date: 4/20/2013 10:40:00 PM
what a unique style of poetry you have. So thoughtful and elegant! Very creative.
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Date: 4/20/2013 5:14:00 PM
Creative work and very unique..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2013 4:55:00 PM
With such a captain, no fear is there! The voyage will be a rewarding adventure filled with love! Wonderful writing that fills the heart with warmth!
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Date: 4/20/2013 9:59:00 AM
A wistful and lovely write, it makes me sigh to read it, but smile, too. Maybe that's strange, but I enjoy poems that stir emotional conflict
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Date: 4/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
Thanks for reading my work and taking the time to comment. Love your idea here, the sailing away of heart's concern. Love, daver
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Date: 4/20/2013 8:58:00 AM
Your boat is not sailing away for ever, it is going to return bringing cheers!!
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Date: 4/20/2013 8:31:00 AM
Hello my dear sista SK!:))). Hope all is well. I'm so glad to stop by here tonight to read your excellent & unique write as always! I love the image here though it's quite sad; but the ending is great- it uplifts my spirit! I'm soo grateful for continuously sharing your gem to me & your precious time stopping by with your sweet & inspiring comments. Have a great weekend as well my dear! love and big hugs, Leonora
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