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My Bleeding Heart

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Song for this: Bloody Valentine (acoustic) by Machine Gun Kelly

JUST fEB 2025 POSTED Poetry Contest

Second Place

bedazzled by jewels beguiled by the gem of you~ diamond eternal as fake gold duals alloys mix unbanding two~ with flames infernal tears drowning in pools blinders tunnel, love eschews~ so notes my journal Love is Surrounded by Monarch butterflies, on migration A tingling in your gut does not defy A warmness flutters inside When flowers perfume When you are near You feel the same, I shall assume Love hurts When rubies now rhinestones, dullen, sullen Diamonds now glass, cutting deep Pollen smothers, I swallow my sorrows My bleeding heart Let’s stay together Dowse the drought Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without

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Paige Hind

Date: 2/16/2025 12:33:00 PM

I am putting this in my favs! Amazing work, Anaya. I love each line. <3

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/17/2025 10:36:00 AM

Paige, that's big a fav, and with much appreciation to you! I'm delighted, ty for your support~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/15/2025 1:39:00 PM

Anaya, an interesting sequence of feeling, which many of us have experienced for real. My brain keeps telling me there is perfection to have, but my experience keeps telling me that if I believe that, I am crazy. Smiles!!

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/16/2025 10:58:00 AM

I'd rather be CrAzy than never have felt the imperfection of love! Making me smile too.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/15/2025 12:15:00 PM

I'm sure your bloody heart will heal, remember never pick the scab, lol. Beautifully written. I'm also sure that indubitably your Valentine's Day garnered all the adorations and love which you so deservedly merited! My best to you, Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/16/2025 10:56:00 AM

Scab's are far and few between, lol. Martinelli's Pear Cider sparkled and raspberry croissants help heal the wounds, try it! You know it ;)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/15/2025 11:26:00 AM

What a creative write you have here. Great Pictures... Hope you had a great "Valentine's Day." Have a wonderful day as you write away.................

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/16/2025 12:32:00 PM

Ty, Paula for a sweetening my day, it was Love as usual yes. Have a nice day as well!

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/14/2025 6:53:00 AM

beautiful and creative haikus, i love the diamond story, so inspiring, well done poet

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/14/2025 7:04:00 AM

Yann, Ty for your lovely comment, hope you are doing well, especially on this day of love! xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2025 5:14:00 PM

Very cool. I especially enjoyed the bottom half and third last two incredible lines

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/14/2025 5:44:00 AM

Ty, for commenting, Andrea, I enjoyed the whole bloody Valentine's themes this year. Lol. Have a good one! xo

My Bleeding Heart

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