Song for this: Bloody Valentine (acoustic) by Machine Gun Kelly
bedazzled by jewels beguiled by the gem of you~ diamond eternal as fake gold duals alloys mix unbanding two~ with flames infernal tears drowning in pools blinders tunnel, love eschews~ so notes my journal Love is Surrounded by Monarch butterflies, on migration A tingling in your gut does not defy A warmness flutters inside When flowers perfume When you are near You feel the same, I shall assume Love hurts When rubies now rhinestones, dullen, sullen Diamonds now glass, cutting deep Pollen smothers, I swallow my sorrows My bleeding heart Let’s stay together Dowse the drought Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without
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