My Bleeding Heart

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Song for this: Bloody Valentine (acoustic) by Machine Gun Kelly

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bedazzled by jewels beguiled by the gem of you~ diamond eternal as fake gold duals alloys mix unbanding two~ with flames infernal tears drowning in pools blinders tunnel, love eschews~ so notes my journal
Love is Surrounded by Monarch butterflies, on migration A tingling in your gut does not defy A warmness flutters inside When flowers perfume When you are near You feel the same, I shall assume Love hurts When rubies now rhinestones, dullen, sullen Diamonds now glass, cutting deep Pollen smothers, I swallow my sorrows My bleeding heart Let’s stay together Dowse the drought Better a diamond with a flaw than a pebble without

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Date: 2/16/2025 12:33:00 PM
I am putting this in my favs! Amazing work, Anaya. I love each line. <3
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Date: 2/17/2025 10:36:00 AM
Paige, that's big a fav, and with much appreciation to you! I'm delighted, ty for your support~
Date: 2/15/2025 1:39:00 PM
Anaya, an interesting sequence of feeling, which many of us have experienced for real. My brain keeps telling me there is perfection to have, but my experience keeps telling me that if I believe that, I am crazy. Smiles!!
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Date: 2/16/2025 10:58:00 AM
I'd rather be CrAzy than never have felt the imperfection of love! Making me smile too.
Date: 2/15/2025 12:15:00 PM
I'm sure your bloody heart will heal, remember never pick the scab, lol. Beautifully written. I'm also sure that indubitably your Valentine's Day garnered all the adorations and love which you so deservedly merited! My best to you, Robert
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Date: 2/16/2025 10:56:00 AM
Scab's are far and few between, lol. Martinelli's Pear Cider sparkled and raspberry croissants help heal the wounds, try it! You know it ;)
Date: 2/15/2025 11:26:00 AM
What a creative write you have here. Great Pictures... Hope you had a great "Valentine's Day." Have a wonderful day as you write away.................
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Date: 2/16/2025 12:32:00 PM
Ty, Paula for a sweetening my day, it was Love as usual yes. Have a nice day as well!
Date: 2/14/2025 6:53:00 AM
beautiful and creative haikus, i love the diamond story, so inspiring, well done poet
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Date: 2/14/2025 7:04:00 AM
Yann, Ty for your lovely comment, hope you are doing well, especially on this day of love! xo
Date: 2/13/2025 5:14:00 PM
Very cool. I especially enjoyed the bottom half and third last two incredible lines
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Date: 2/14/2025 5:44:00 AM
Ty, for commenting, Andrea, I enjoyed the whole bloody Valentine's themes this year. Lol. Have a good one! xo
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