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46 plus karat Peridot gem from Pakistan at Smithsonian Museum

My Birthstone Gem

Peridot Of all the fine gems that I know, my favorite is Peridot. My August birthstone pleases me, since color green and I agree. Now, Peridot is lesser-known among most gemstones that are shown. It once was called 'Gem Of The Sun', and Cleopatra's most loved one. Egyptian scrolls say priests had cups, adorned with Peridot for sups; that Peridot empowered them to speak with Gods thru this fine gem. Ancient Hawaiian history, says stones are tears of dear Pele, the Goddess of volcanoes, fire; her gift from earth they so admire. Mysterious, some crystals of our Peridot, came from above, in pallasite meteorites, a gift from space that sure delights. Our Peridot is only seen in varied shades of color green. Most other gemstones will be found in multi colors 'neath the ground. Smithsonian Museum shows a famous Peridot which glows... a forty-six plus karat stone from Pakistan, and is well-known. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: A Gem For Your Verse Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire Judged: 10/26/2016 Form: Iambic Octameter (16 syllables, 8 feet per line; 8th and 16th syllable rhyme in each line) Notes: Peridot is pronounced: PER-i-doh Pallasites contain crystals of Olivine, which in its purest form is known as the semi-precious gemstone Peridot.
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Date: 10/27/2016 3:43:00 PM
History of the Peridot! Very nice! Congrats on your top win, Sandra!
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Date: 10/27/2016 5:48:00 AM
Congrats on your top most podium! Your poem at large is a gem by itself Sandra!
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Date: 10/27/2016 1:03:00 AM
How interesting! I bought one of my granddaughters a peridot braclet for her August birthday. I think I'll include send this to her. Congratulations on your win, Sandra. Carole
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Date: 10/26/2016 8:40:00 PM
WAy to GO with PeridOT!! BIG congrats,Sandra!!!
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Date: 10/26/2016 3:36:00 PM
Congrats on your top win with this gem Sandra..
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:29:00 PM
Your poem was delightful so glad you wrote a gem of a poem..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:24:00 PM
This piece was a gem!! Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 10/26/2016 11:05:00 AM
I love peridot stones, but being about half the density of a diamond they require a little more TLC. Your work did them justice, congratulations Sandra...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/26/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie, for your nice comment, congrats and for the TLC suggestion! Again, I appreciate your visit! Sandra
Date: 10/26/2016 10:53:00 AM
Great job. Congrats!!!!
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Date: 10/26/2016 10:40:00 AM
Your poem is wonderful, Sandra. Well worthy of its first-place win. In beautiful language you relayed not only the history of the gem, but why it is so meaningful to you. Indeed, Peridot is a treasure. Please send me a Soup mail and let me know where to send the prize. Congratulations! Carolyn
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/26/2016 11:41:00 AM
Carolyn, thank you for offering such a unique theme for your contest, and a real reward prize! I am honored and humbled with my placement and your supportive comments which are so much appreciated! Thank you again! Hugs, Sandra
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/26/2016 11:39:00 AM
The unique rhyme scheme was quite appealing!
Date: 10/22/2016 10:23:00 AM
I love the stone too Sandra I am attracted to green gems and have written a poem about one I own. I also have a tsavorite pendant and a periodot one too - i used to watch the shopping channels I no longer bother but they do introduce you to some amazing gems you would not see in your local jewellers:-) hugs jan xx7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/22/2016 12:32:00 PM
Nice to know you like peridot too, Jan. Thank you for you visit and nice rating! I enjoyed your gem poem too. Hugs, Sandra
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