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My Birthday Song

The waters broke forth Blood followed after The head sooner appeared A push truly was needed A nurse did a little pulling Legs now were out The chord had to be cut A slap on the butt was good A cry sweet to hear A new soul was born Healthy,handsome and breathing Held dearly in the bossom Songs were sung,praising God's works,amazing The child is still surviving Mom did works so great Now she is long gone More good had she taught him His soul now in God anchored One score and a year now he is Saved by God's grace amazing Prayers and praises is he offering He prays for mercy and lifet Forgiveness of sins Desiring a soul so clean Escape from spiritual bongage Free from filth and sin Praying for love and freedom He hates a life unclean Pain and sorrow he knows all In life he wishes to see more Grow old,grey haired and wax wise Give love,save lives and live a legacy Live long,live good and be raptured Glory to God im 21

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Date: 9/14/2014 6:53:00 PM
Hi Tinashe, what a beautiful write this is! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings to you. Pandita
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:33:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Tinashe - I choose your first great written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:55:00 AM
Tinashe,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/12/2014 6:52:00 AM
You came out of mother's womb and started a journey on earth. You were keen to follow Lord's path and that was the most important thing. Your birthday song is a happy song--most touching. Love
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