My Birthday Bones

September birthday
sticks may, stones definitely...
never throw sapphire!


For "Flowers or Stones" contest sponsored by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 9:28 PM
congrats George on a terrific win for a superb entry luv..
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 9:44 PM
haha, I had to pause to think about this one and then GOT it. Congrats on your clever senryu.
Susan Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 7:41 PM
nice senryu - love the title and how it adds to this piece. congrats on your win!
Quigley Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win George
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest George. Love, Carol
Squyres Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 7:03 AM
A cute senryu !! Congrats on your placement in the contest !!
A   Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 8:41 PM
George... good luck in the contest...p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 2:43 PM
I haven't checked the contest out so I don't know what it is about but reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Sara
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