My Biggest Mistake

knowingly or unknowingly,the smiles I taint
I can never claim to be a saint
I make mistakes big and small
isn’t that what humans do after all?

I bow my head in compunction in prayer
submitting myself and mistakes in His care
but often fail to apologize to the ones I wrong
to those ears too, my penitence does belong

sometimes I reach out when it’s too late
they’ve either forgotten me or the hate
my biggest mistake is not apologizing in time
that magnifies the trivial mistake to a crime

I fail to muster the courage or word
and fear that it might feel absurd
should try harder to turn myself over
instead of forever yearning for closure


Written on 07/06/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/26/2017 3:24:00 PM
so true and a wonderful lesson for all. I can really relate to that last verse in learning this lesson myself.
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Date: 7/8/2016 9:21:00 AM
A lot to think about through these powerful words of wisdom offered in your poem, Sara. Congratulations on your fine placement in this Premiere Contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/8/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thanks Sandra,loved every word of your 'Songs Unsung',echoes my feeling too!
Date: 7/8/2016 8:53:00 AM
Sara, this is so simple yet very right on, beautifully expressed lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/8/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura for picking my poem.I wrote this one in a hurry as the contest was about to close:)
Date: 7/6/2016 4:03:00 PM
saying sorry seems a lost art, thanks for the reminder.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/8/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks DM!
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