Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

My Biggest Mistake

where's mistake perhaps i have found 
                             without loving my heart can't live sound 
                             i never hurt any one as i know and think 
                        misunderstanding may cause due to missing link 
                           i am suspected and sometimes i am blamed
                           without any fault many times i am ashamed  
                              i know i am very simple and God believer 
                              i love all so i am inflicted in to brain fever 
                           though love is my biggest mistake ever i find
                       this mistake rebuilds me and gives me peace of mind  



                                     Written on: 2nd July 2016

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Lynn Marie August 18, 2016 at 9:13 AM There is such infinite depth to your heart and your gift to move people so profoundly with your beautiful words is a testament to the power of a generous, illuminating, extraordinary mind. May love and faith sustain you in times of uncertainty.:-) Fantastic writing, a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn Bl Devnath August 18, 2016 at 10:50 AM Thanks for your wonderful uplifting comment my friend. Praying to God always for all and may Supreme most God bless us all so that we can hear Him in true sense. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Daniel Turner July 25, 2016 at 5:34 PM Bl, I really don't see you making too many mistakes. I realize none of us are perfect but you have such a kind heart any mistake you may have made was purely unintentional I'm sure. I think this poem proves my point. Enjoyed reading you today. Bl Devnath July 25, 2016 at 9:21 PM Thanks for your comment my friend. Hugs, bl

Carrie Richards July 8, 2016 at 7:37 PM I know you to have a kind heart, and any mistakes made in the past, would not be of your own making. Life is so full of unintentional misunderstands. A Wonderful Poem !! Bl Devnath July 9, 2016 at 11:35 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon July 8, 2016 at 9:47 AM Congrats on your win! :) Bl Devnath July 8, 2016 at 10:31 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for wishes. Loved always, bl

Beautiful Scars July 8, 2016 at 8:56 AM BL, I fell in love with this, just superb...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Bl Devnath July 8, 2016 at 10:30 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for giving placement of my poem in the contest and for your appreciation with lovely wishes. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman July 6, 2016 at 5:24 PM Wonderful just wonderful poetry. Bl Devnath July 7, 2016 at 12:14 PM Thanks my lovely genius friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

James Tate July 6, 2016 at 4:02 PM BL, good rhymes, interesting poem. Don't sell yourself short, my friend. I'm glad you are a God believer. It's good to hear from you. Bl Devnath July 7, 2016 at 12:11 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Dineen Williams Gault July 3, 2016 at 7:21 AM Gee this was so beautiful. Those with the biggest hearts, do experience a lot of hurt, but I feel the gift of love is it's own reward. Fantastic write, quite touching! Bl Devnath July 4, 2016 at 3:08 PM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful touching comment. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian July 3, 2016 at 12:40 AM Dear...this truth is one that rings true in my heart as well. Often I have determined NOT to love because it brings pain, yet....the heart will not listen. I'm glad your mistake brings you peace. Congrats on POTD Bl Devnath July 3, 2016 at 10:47 AM God has given you a nice rhythmic heart so you can't live without loving. Thousand times' determinations are melted as the ice in hot or gold in too much hot. Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your comment and wishes. Loved always, bl

Connie Marcum Wong July 2, 2016 at 2:58 PM It can indeed feel like the biggest mistake to love the wrong person. That is why over half the marriages fail. I like to think we are wrapping up past karma with that person before moving on, rather than thinking it is a mistake. Just my Polly Anna personality. Congratulations on having your profound poem featured as POTD BL! Blessings, Connie ; ) Bl Devnath July 3, 2016 at 9:14 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Walter T. Ashe July 2, 2016 at 1:21 PM BL, if "Love is the biggest mistake" then may we all make the biggest mistake every day of our existence! Thank you for this eye opener!!! :-) Bl Devnath July 3, 2016 at 8:46 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon July 2, 2016 at 12:41 PM Very interesting. Congrats and GL. :) Bl Devnath July 2, 2016 at 1:09 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your wishing comment. Loved always, bl

Bl Devnath July 2, 2016 at 9:47 AM i am hereby giving my heartiest thanks to our lovely Poetrysoup for choosing this poem for POTD. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2016 at 8:16 AM - Congratulations, dear Bl - A beautiful poem (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath July 2, 2016 at 9:51 AM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your beautiful comment with 7 and also for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Charlie Smith July 2, 2016 at 6:57 AM Well done loving friend. Congratulations BL on POTD honors... Bl Devnath July 2, 2016 at 9:51 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Daniel Turner July 2, 2016 at 6:06 AM Lovely write BL. It's never a mistake to love others, however it can be painful if you expect to get love in return. Congratulations on POTD. Bl Devnath July 2, 2016 at 12:34 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Pace Ink-U-Script July 2, 2016 at 3:15 AM I love Victors comment...enjoyed this write of yours bl Bl Devnath July 2, 2016 at 9:52 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl