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My Biggest Mistake

where's mistake perhaps i have found 
                             without loving my heart can't live sound 
                             i never hurt any one as i know and think 
                        misunderstanding may cause due to missing link 
                           i am suspected and sometimes i am blamed
                           without any fault many times i am ashamed  
                              i know i am very simple and God believer 
                              i love all so i am inflicted in to brain fever 
                           though love is my biggest mistake ever i find
                       this mistake rebuilds me and gives me peace of mind  



                                     Written on: 2nd July 2016

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/18/2016 9:13:00 AM

There is such infinite depth to your heart and your gift to move people so profoundly with your beautiful words is a testament to the power of a generous, illuminating, extraordinary mind. May love and faith sustain you in times of uncertainty.:-) Fantastic writing, a pleasure to read. blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/18/2016 10:50:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful uplifting comment my friend. Praying to God always for all and may Supreme most God bless us all so that we can hear Him in true sense. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/25/2016 5:34:00 PM

Bl, I really don't see you making too many mistakes. I realize none of us are perfect but you have such a kind heart any mistake you may have made was purely unintentional I'm sure. I think this poem proves my point. Enjoyed reading you today.

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2016 9:21:00 PM

Thanks for your comment my friend. Hugs, bl

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/8/2016 7:37:00 PM

I know you to have a kind heart, and any mistakes made in the past, would not be of your own making. Life is so full of unintentional misunderstands. A Wonderful Poem !!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/9/2016 11:35:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your appreciation. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/8/2016 9:47:00 AM

Congrats on your win! :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for wishes. Loved always, bl

Beautiful Scars

Date: 7/8/2016 8:56:00 AM

BL, I fell in love with this, just superb...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/8/2016 10:30:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for giving placement of my poem in the contest and for your appreciation with lovely wishes. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/6/2016 5:24:00 PM

Wonderful just wonderful poetry.

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/7/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thanks my lovely genius friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

James Tate

Date: 7/6/2016 4:02:00 PM

BL, good rhymes, interesting poem. Don't sell yourself short, my friend. I'm glad you are a God believer. It's good to hear from you.

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/7/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 7/3/2016 7:21:00 AM

Gee this was so beautiful. Those with the biggest hearts, do experience a lot of hurt, but I feel the gift of love is it's own reward. Fantastic write, quite touching!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/4/2016 3:08:00 PM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful touching comment. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/3/2016 12:40:00 AM

Dear...this truth is one that rings true in my heart as well. Often I have determined NOT to love because it brings pain, yet....the heart will not listen. I'm glad your mistake brings you peace. Congrats on POTD

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 10:47:00 AM

God has given you a nice rhythmic heart so you can't live without loving. Thousand times' determinations are melted as the ice in hot or gold in too much hot. Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your comment and wishes. Loved always, bl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/2/2016 2:58:00 PM

It can indeed feel like the biggest mistake to love the wrong person. That is why over half the marriages fail. I like to think we are wrapping up past karma with that person before moving on, rather than thinking it is a mistake. Just my Polly Anna personality. Congratulations on having your profound poem featured as POTD BL! Blessings, Connie ; )

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/3/2016 9:14:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your wishes. Loved always, bl