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My Biggest Fear

I am only one who hopes that I didn't have a fear But I do, I do have one Most fears are being trapped by bear But mine, mine is not a pun I have a father that left He left when I was young He did no theft But it still stung My mother says it was his choice I don't know what to believe I could always just speak my voice Showing her my grieve My mother says Oh, He's just a jerk! But how am I to know if she won't let me see My biggest fear, It isn't all about me! My biggest fear is not just to be free My biggest fear isn't having glory My biggest fear, is hearing the other side of the story

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2014 8:02:00 AM

Great write about a sad story - well done!

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 8:36:00 AM

Katelyn, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Katelyn Parks
Date: 5/15/2014 11:00:00 AM

Yes, I would like that. Thank you SKAT xoxo~~Katelyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2014 3:36:00 PM

This is very deep Katelyn, sometimes I don't want to know the other side of any story... welcome to poetry soup....xox~ Linda

Katelyn Parks
Date: 5/15/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thank you Linda, yes I totally agree. xoxo~~Katelyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2014 3:34:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Katelyn :) - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2014 5:34:00 PM

oh Katelyn this is a very emotional write many can relate to. there must be so much hurt for everyone involved when a family breaks up Hearing the other side of the story may bring closure but may also cause more pain - hugs Jan x

Katelyn Parks
Date: 5/14/2014 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Jan, yes I do believe it will bring me closure.. but also just more pain. And since I am only 13 years old, you can see what I have gone through