Paula Goldsmith Poet Terza Rima

My Big Brother

My big brother filled with love                           everyone saw his grace                                   he had so much joy to speak of



even when he stated his life case                      holy was all around                                          his faith filled this place 



Jesus is where hope was crowned. 




Date Written: 6/5/2021   
Note: As a young child, I thought of Jesus as my big 
brother.          
Jesus Poetry Contest                                                      Sponsored by:Regina McIntosh

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Caren Krutsinger June 14, 2021 at 10:07 PM It is wise to think of Jesus as your big brother, incredibly wise. Paula Goldsmith June 16, 2021 at 2:12 PM Thank You, for writing. I am glad your like this write. As a very young child, I thought of Jesus as my big brother. It has always stayed with me. Have a blessed day..........................

Jennifer Proxenos June 6, 2021 at 9:06 AM H Paula, your religious poems are awesome, but you have a distinct style when writing them. Kudos my friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith June 7, 2021 at 8:44 AM Thank You, for writing and for your kinds words. I am glad your like "My Big Brother" write. My words/poems/writings all come for God. Have a blessed day/week writing away with hugs............