Paula Goldsmith Poet Haiku

My Big Bath Tub

Delightful water  
Today I splashed-played and swam  
Mom said I was clean  
 

Date Written:5/29/2021    

Note: A lake or the ocean can be a great and fun way to take a bath and get clean.                                                                                                                   Bite Size Poem 3 Poetry Contest                                                              Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Ruby Kelly June 1, 2021 at 11:07 AM Love haikus but this one, in particular, is so cute! Love your work, Paula. - Ruby. Paula Goldsmith June 2, 2021 at 9:23 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my splash-splash fun write. Have a blessed day.............

Paul Callus June 1, 2021 at 9:52 AM This is so cute, Paula! I enjoy swimming, and the shower that follows...double washed double clean :) Warm regards // paul Paula Goldsmith June 2, 2021 at 9:23 AM Thank You, for writing. Yes, you are double clean with your splash-splash and shower. Have a blessed day.............

Tom Cunningham May 30, 2021 at 12:46 PM Nothing beats a good splash splash Paula, Good luck in the contest, hope you are having a lovely weekend. Tom Paula Goldsmith June 1, 2021 at 8:48 AM Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my splash splash write. Have a blessed day.............

Ann Foster May 30, 2021 at 7:21 AM Haha... wonderful... Ann Paula Goldsmith May 30, 2021 at 8:07 AM Thanks, for writing. So glad I gave you a laugh. I love to give a laugh or smile. Have a blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf May 29, 2021 at 9:28 PM This delightful haiku brings a smile or three to the most jaded face, methinks. Love it, Paula. Good luck in the contest and Happy Sunday! :) gw Paula Goldsmith May 30, 2021 at 8:06 AM Thanks, for writing and for your good luck. So glad I gave you a smile. I love to give a smile. Have a blessed day.............