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My Bicycle

Once I had a bicycle,
A loving present from my grandfather;
Since I was his favorite granddaughter,
He granted my wish at a snap of my finger .

Since he was so old,
A new bicycle he could hardly afford;
He took his bike when he was young,
Which I found it once at the back of our barn.

As far as I remember,
It was really so old and rugged;
But my grandpa was like Mr. Mac-Gyber,
Amazingly fixing all things all-over.

My granda was a well-known painter,
I thought he will repaint and use sandpapers;
When I surreptitiously sneaked into his hut,
He was there recycling all my milk cans.

When everything was done,
He gladly gave it to me with a big hug;
I hurriedly drove it at once,
Down the street and field with so much fun.

“My bike was real a unique one!” I thought.
So different from others in our neighborhood,
Its wailing siren was made up of a  cow’s horn,
Tubes were made of dried bamboos and corn.

Other parts were still the same,
Like forks, hubs and chainwheel set,
The rest were made up  of my milk cans,
They were pedal, brake and seatgear stem.

Handle bars were what I liked  most,
Converted from the handle of his old plow;
So sturdy and so strong all I knew,
And  I can drive it  so long in full control.

However, when I travelled quite afar,
Parts were falling one at a time;
Until everything suddenly split apart,
Eventually it dropped and rolled me down.

©2012Leonora Galinta
     All Rights Reserved


Date: Aug. 3, 2012


4th Place Winner (My Very First Winning Poem)
Contest: Any Poem of the Week Contest
Contest Judged: 8/4/12         
Poet Sponsor: Secret
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Daniel Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 1:27 AM
A beautiful memory to cherish, Leonora:) Hearty congratulations on your win:) I like your name so much:) sounds angelic:):)
Gasun Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:42 AM
For the commendation of my name, thank you so much. However, it doesn't really sound like that for me especially when heardbeing pronounced by non-Eng. speakers... they have the tendency to chop it like le-o-no-ra :))) I'll give you a hug and brotherly kiss.
Gasun Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend,Jo for the nice comment and your congratulatory greetings. Indeed, a beautiful memry to cherish my friend. In fact, I wrote this purposely in memory of my father who was really a very resourceful, creative person and who loved to gift a bike to his grandchildren. I wrote this after a year of his death. Tytyssm once again. Hugs and kisses!
Delaney Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 7:11 PM
Such a fun read. A very original kind of bike and memory. Congrats on your awesome win, Hugs, SuZ
Gasun Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend,Suzanne for the nice comment and your congratulatory greetings. In fact, I wrote this purposely in memory of my father who was really a very resourceful, creative person and who loved to gift a bike to his grandchildren. I wrote this after a year of his death. Tytyssm once again. Hugs and kisses!
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Very beautiful and memorable write and congratulations on your win, Galeo :) Hugs Eve
Gasun Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:30 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Eve for the nice comment and your congratulatory greetings. In fact, I wrote this purposely in memory of my father who was really a very resourceful, creative person and who loved to gift a bike to his grandchildren. I wrote this after a year of his death. Tytyssm once again. Hugs and kises!
Nayak Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 2:44 AM
congrats on the win Dear Galeo, this one is cute :)//love, Anu:
Gasun Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 2:59 AM
Wow! Thank you so much my dear friend Anulaxmi for your wonderful visit and congratulatory comments! I'll be back to visit you and your poems and so with the rest here.Hugs hugs!
A   Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Hello SIS and BFF, awesome to see you here on my contest list,, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "No Words" if you'd like. LINDA (with love)
Gasun Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 2:56 AM
Wow! Thank you so much dearest Sis-Bff! Just dropping by a while here before going out to buy something. I'm still at home preparing. I'll be at the airport by 7pm tonight. Again, I thank you so much. This is my very first winning poem here At PS. TYTYSSSM Again for my win!. Many lovely hugs from me! Love you!
A   Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 9:57 PM
Hi, Leonora by super BFF... i'm calling this one one of my favorite poems .... I can visual the bike...makes me want to ride by your side like a sister. That way we can dust off the dirt like family. you seem like the kind of friend who keeps the down feeling away... xox~pd
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 8:08 PM
wow, what a guy he was. I am happy to see a cute story like this one portrayed in your poem. Glad to see it made the winner list of "any poem week" also. Congratulations. Loved reading about your experiences. Gosh, you know alot about bikes to name all those parts like you did.
Gasun Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 10:07 AM
thank you so much, Andrea. i have a bicycle here and a scooter back home.
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem Week" contest Leonora. Love, Carol
Gasun Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 5:50 AM
Thank you very much, Carol.
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 6:18 PM
I liked the surprise ending..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..It was a great spirit uplifter..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Sara
Gasun Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 8:25 AM
Thanks for all the encouragement and inspiration, too, Sara. Wish you all the blessings and graces everyday!
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August 7, 2012 at 5:54 PM
A touching tribute and endearing write, Leonora! Congrats on your wonderful win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Gasun Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Thank you so much, Ronda. It's my father who gave me the inspiration to write. Wish you all the blessings and graces!
Liwayway Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 10:59 AM
congrats for being the 4th place winner..yehey!!! *Maria/Mary**
Gasun Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 8:21 AM
Thank you,Maria!
Poet Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Beautifully written and a great dedication.Congrats on your win Leonora!
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Thank you very much, Kash. Your comment uplifted me. Have a nice day and good luck always!
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Leonora congrats on your win, love it...just the best dedication I have probably read here...David
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 9:28 PM
A million thanks, David. That's a great encouragement from a great poem like you.
Ramage Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 11:21 AM
A beautiful tribute to your father, just a lovely poem. YOu can feel the love you had for him. Lee
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Thank you very much Lee. Your comment has lifted up my spirit. I am really proud of my dad and I am missing him so much.
Eastman Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your poem is a wonder memorial to a wonderful person. He made great memories... I'm sure.
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 9:28 AM
Thank you very much, Carol for dropping by and reading my poem. My father has indeed a lot of wonderful memories to me/us. He did not go to college but he learned everything by himself and he became a talented one. We are proud of him. Have a nice day!
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August 5, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your win, well done xx
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 8:55 AM
Thank you very much, Mandy Tams-The Golden-Girl.
A   Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 8:03 PM
LEONORA ;-) congratulations with your awesome poem of the week. Thanks for the contest support. LUV~ PD
Gasun Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Thanks a million for making this poem win, PD. Thank you for all the support, inspiration and encouragement. More power and blessings to the greatest poet like you!
Gasun Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 8:44 PM
Thank you, PD. More power to you always!
Burch Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 1:51 PM
sooooo very beautiful and toucMhing, Leonora!!! *tear* well done! love ya,deb...yes you may use my heart concrete poem for your personal family use...it looks cool with coloured fonts :) enjoy...deb
Gasun Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 8:45 PM
Thank you, Deb. Have a wonderful day!
Liwayway Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 11:08 AM
a great father indeed deserved a great poem from a great poet/writer like you... excellent composition my friend..Keep it up **Mary**
Gasun Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 12:10 PM
Thanks Mary for a nice comment. I just dropped by because I got visitors from Vietnam. I will bring them to church tomorrow. Wish you all the best and luck for the poetry contest about nature. More power friend.
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Yes, you had a real unique bicycle....and a very sweet and lovely grandfather + grandmother - and their son (your father)inherited goodness from them. Very well and good written poem Leonora - Thank you for visit my poems today. - Have a beautiful weekend in sunshine. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 8:46 PM
Thanks and hugs, Anne-Lise. Belated Happy, happy birthday!!!! May you always have all the blessings and happiness in life.
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