My Best Pal

My Best Pal

My very best pal is a hairy ole' guy.
His breath is so bad, it bring tears to my eyes.

Mexican music he really adores ;
though he lies, not dances on all of my floors.

He's happy go lucky,
and smiles all the time.
he has no money, not even a dime.
For why would he need it,
when he is the boss.
And I, just his servant,
pleasing him at all cost.

My pal is a stinky ole' Beagle, you see ;
I dearly love him, he tolerates me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/13/2010 3:57:00 PM
lol, well my best pal is my dog as well,thanks God he's still with me 7 years later. He is the best male in my life,,lol,, To bab my son named him PAIN* And abut the Mexican music, weeeeeeeeeeee!,, have a good one,..L.),..p.d.
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:02:00 AM
haahaha enjoyed muchly!
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Date: 6/9/2010 3:19:00 PM
Kool poem on your lovely companion Gail >> James
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Date: 6/4/2010 4:40:00 AM
Very cute, I have a Chiweenie and she has it made.
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:20:00 AM
(continued) Now to study the forms of poetry check out Resources left side of page and you will see Forms of Poetry click there and they are in alphabetical order. Hope I have helped you Gail. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:17:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this piece this morning Gail. It is fine to communicate by leaving comments on ones poems or at the present we have Soupmail which you will see a little teacup by the poets name under the title of the poem which you click on and it takes you to Soupmail. Then you can check your soupmail by clicking My Soup Mail in the Member Area on the left side of the page. You will need to turn yours on as you don't have a teacup now so it isn't on (continued)
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