My Best Friend

As I lay in bed
The unicorns on the blanket
Suddenly don’t look so nice
But not too mean yet either

I wait throughout the night
For my friend to finally come
I stare patiently at the ceiling
Hoping my BFF will show

I
Wait
and 
Wait
and 
WAIT

Until finally

My closet opens up
I jump and clap
Though quietly
My friend has finally come

We play a lot
Out in the streets
Which makes it hard
To see his face

But that's okay
I don’t like his face
Why?
I Don’t Like His Face

His Face
That has no eyes anymore
Not after he told me
To give them to my neighbor

I don’t see my neighbor anymore

His Face
That has a nose
But only two slitted holes
Instead of a bump

My friend says its for hunting

His Face
That has a really scary mouth
A mouth with super duper long teeth
A mouth with only one purpose

Which is…
Will you tell anyone?
It’s a secret
What his mouth does

The Mouth that eats
The Souls of
My real friends
My mommy and daddy

Anyone I care about
Just because I messed up
Once
Just Once

Just Once for
My friends to be gone

Well, except for one
My Best Friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 20, 2026 at 1:55 AM
A chilling, well-controlled free-verse poem that lets innocence curdle gradually into horror. The childlike repetitions, line breaks, and deceptively simple language make the speaker’s isolation and attachment to this frightening “best friend” especially affecting; the final contrast between the lost family and the one remaining companion lands with real menace.
Haywood Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Eerie, unsettling, and incredibly effective. The line 'I don’t see my neighbor anymore' sent a genuine chill down my spine. Fantastic storytelling through a hauntingly innocent narrator. - Chris
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