My Best Ever Love Poem

Laid on the cliff top looking out over the sea

Wild flowers surround me as far as the eye can see

I find myself day dreaming something I often do

Praying that my dreaming will one day come true.


For you are my forever friend 

My love for you can have no end 

Forever love lasts eternally 

and is given for all you mean to me.


It is my heart to you I give 

It is yours as long as we live 

My heart will keep you safe and warm

Provide shelter from the fiercest storm.


Forever love will take your hand 

Guide you through the life you've planned

When you cry it will dry your tears

and take away your darkest fears.


Forever love will help you win 

When life's door is locked. Love lets you in

It guides everything I say and do 

and all I am I share with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 12:21 PM
Stopping back with congratulations....Tim
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 8:25 AM
hey, did you enter this as your best love poem ever before or AFTER I told you it was your best love poem ever?? I'm feeling smug because I was SO right. Congratulations, my friend on your number one win.
Torres Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 8:10 AM
very well done!!! Congrats on your high win, DAz!! :O))
Sietesantos Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations, Darren on a well-deserved big win!
Nance Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Well done first place, Nice shiny medal :)
A. Sharma Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 5:34 AM
Wow Darren an awesome write indeed ! Really at your best ! congrats on top placement !
Allison Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 1:37 AM
First time I read it knew it was a number 1 winner- well done Daz am delighted for you! Hugs as ever Jan xxxx
George   Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 1:35 AM
Very sweet endearing poem Darren. Many congrrats on your well deserved win. Lainie
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 1:08 AM
:) endearing and so sweet :D i love this be recited and well with feelings.. :) CONGRATULATIONS Darren!!! :D!
A   Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 9:52 PM
DARREN, Congratulations, thank you for the support. Enjoy my blog "Four Letter Words." if you like or have the time.. ((THIS IS A SWEET POEM ON LOVE)) Good night.... XOX~ LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Darren, this is so tender and sweet, I think it truly must be your best love poem ever. Sure to be high on the winners' list!
Poshiwa Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Beautiful poem Darren......
Smith Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:49 AM
Yes love will guide you and let you in....wonderful Darren
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 5:46 AM
Darren that is truly beautiful, so romantic with beautiful imagery. I hope one day your dreams come true - she sure is a very lucky lady. Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Christian Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 5:01 AM
a nice poem, good luck if you entered the contest
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