My Beloved Sweetheart

Affection and solicitude
rises in my eyes,
shaped into tears
as fresh as dew,
she was first and new,

lays calm and motionless
touch lost, ways parted,
Best of moments passed
as a flash of light,
an absolutely unprofitable life,

Rosy cheeks,
glittery eyes,
knee long silky hair,
tall and perfect thin,
why lay quiet ?

Who provoked you ?
Why been so impulsive
to quit ?
Did I mean a hurt
That you harried? 

I drown deep into,
love that's like
suicide in river,
prick of a thorn
to body with no soul,

love is still hung
like a crystal before me,
I can feel fragrance
of your eternal breath,
My beloved sweetheart ! 
 
Fire burns in my heart
tranquilize,
flowing emotions
down my cheeks,
pacify,

My love, my inspiration,
how could u take leave of,
and leave me alone 
in world to suffer
You ought to reply !
My beloved sweetheart !





written on 3/5/14
sponsor- Amy green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 29, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Dr Upma,, Congratulations, in Amy's heartfelt contest for "Our Beloved, Sweetheart." RIP.... Love ~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Dr.Upma
A. Sharma Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Thnx Dr. Ram !
Villarosa Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 6:25 AM
Lovely tribute to our beloved friend Linda-Marie, I guess she is happy reading this adorable poem. Congrats on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel
A. Sharma Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Thnx Noel ,, appreciate ur time !
Callus Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 2:43 AM
This is beautiful, emotive and yet so sad. Congrats on your win. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 5:39 AM
Thanks for lovely comments n wishes Paul // upma//
Dunn Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Nice but so full of sadness, a tragic story but a good expressive work here, So full of emotion, i can feel for the person your writing about and reflect and identify with her very well at different times of my life when I've lost someone I've loved. cheri
A. Sharma Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Thanks for passing by cheri ! Losing someone u love is an irony ,, it's a wound on soul that never can heal !
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