My Beloved Death

My beloved 
So warm
So full of life
You stare at me
With your emerald eyes
As I stroke your golden hair
Your arm wrapped around my waist
People walk by
They recognize true love
Thus is jealous

On a rainy night
I call for you
No sound
I came to your house
Only to find
The room has been flooded with red liquid
My eyes wetting with sadness
I ran around the house 
Looking, searching, and hoping
Nothing has been touched
Up the stairs I went
I stumbled
But I climbed up
Only to smell smoke
I followed that scent
I found your door open
And I saw you
On fire
Burning alive screaming for help
The flame was destroying your existence
I stand there watching in terror
Scared for life
Suddenly
A wind
A wind strong has the gods
Lifted your body up in the air
Floating
I tried to grab you
But the flames stopped me
Crunch
The last sound I heard
Before I dropped down
Watching your blood pour out of your body

My heart is alive
But I fell like I died
My heart began to rush
Faster and harder
I know what to do now
Revenge
My only satisfying option

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/20/2014 6:04:00 AM
Wonderful write and congrats on your poem being featured this week, crystal
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:10:00 PM
Very sad, and full of imagery good writte- jeremiah
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Date: 5/6/2009 10:58:00 AM
Powerfully imaginative ... wonderfully written .. . as a reader I was gripped from beginning to end ... you have talent tell a story, another good write.
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