My Beloved Daughters

My Beloved Daughters + My Lovely Children

The greatest bliss of my life to glow and shine
are my lovely children,two beloved daughters of mine.

I guided my children to step forward while raising up and caring them.	
My family tree started to grow taking older daughter as its stem.

Older one called me ’Maa’ first time,the sweetest word soothed me best.
 My children were my priority, everything else came next.

  Younger one came ten years later,when the older one was my right hand.
She left for higher studies and next day younger one held my hand.

In childhood,I was their light of life, now both turned my grand success after all
At present i watch my wonderful competent daughters to impress each and all.


  02/21/16

    My Lovely Children Poetry Contest  Second Place
Sponsor  Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Selfa Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations Anisha on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
Dutta Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Hans for appreciation
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February 27, 2016 at 12:07 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
Dutta Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Thanks Linda. Love. Anisha D
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 5:17 PM
A beautiful poem, Anisha. Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win!!! Hugs Eve
Dutta Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Thanks Eve for your kind consideration. Hugs. Anisha
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:37 PM
This is a great story, Anisha. I'd bet you are a fantastic mom and both daughters are just like you. Congratulations on your write and your two beautiful successful daughters. Peace my friend:)
Dutta Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Yes I admit. I am a proud Mom and also a proud daughter of my beloved Father. Thanks Daniel for appreciation. Anisha D
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:30 PM
How fortunate you to have lovely daughters. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Dutta Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Thank you so much Joyce. Love. Anisha
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 3:19 PM
very beautiful Anisha - it is so wonderful to see them grow and flourish into adulthood:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Yes I know, but hard truth is that, they don't need me more. They have their own lives. But this is reality. Thank you Jan. Anisha D
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Anisha, congrats on your placement in my contest and thank you for being a part of it! -luloo :) *smiles*
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