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My Beautiful Sweetheart

Hello, my beautiful sweetheart can you hear me? feel me? I am around you because I can't go from you when you touched my heart my name was a wind of spring this wind blew up on the great seawater and made it tidy like a youth girl when you touched my heart I flew in the sky a long time kissed your soft field with a deep love I forgot my identity I thought I am the king of the world

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Susan Palli

Date: 7/5/2018 5:05:00 AM

Nice feelings well expressed! Thank you for sharing!

Syed Noor E Alam
Date: 9/20/2018 2:48:00 PM

Thank You

Lyric Man

Date: 6/28/2018 3:37:00 PM

Syed.. I enjoyed reading your write this afternoon. I had a couple of down hours and wanted to take in some creative poetry. I'm glad I came across your interesting work! PS Thank you for your comments on my writes. You make my day!

Syed Noor E Alam
Date: 7/1/2018 6:06:00 AM

Thank you very much