Daniel Turner Poet Rhyme

My Beautiful Place

I've seen the Rocky Mountains
From Alberta to New Mexico
Heavenly reaching cathedrals
Rock walls like stained glass windows
Death Valley's crystalline sands
Sparkle like moonlit seas
Red orange cactus roses
Saguaro and Joshua Trees
Green meadows covered with weeds
Deep purple to crimson red
Melting in waves of heat
Reflecting in lakes where they bled
Looked out, over Niagara Falls
Sunlit mist of every hue
Thousand Islands, covered with snow
In The St Lawrence of indigo blue
Multicolored hot air balloons
Floating lazily 'cross baby blue skies
But the place most beautiful to me
Is here, with you by my side




     an original poem by Daniel Turner

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Jean Murray June 18, 2016 at 8:07 PM Travel is good, but travel with a loved one is always better. All the colours of the rainbow. I love this one. Daniel Turner June 18, 2016 at 8:56 PM Thank you Jean. It is always better to share experiences with someone special.

Joanna Daniel June 18, 2016 at 3:14 AM "But the place most beautiful to me Is here, with you by my side" - What you have said is so very true:) All the best:) Daniel Turner June 18, 2016 at 7:31 AM Thank you Jo. I appreciate the support and encouragement. You are really good to me.

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2016 at 8:31 PM I adore this one and how it all comes down to being with that one special person. Daniel Turner June 17, 2016 at 9:15 PM Isn't that the way you feel? I'm certain at some point you have gone with your husband in the truck. Every place is more beautiful when you are with the one you love.

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2016 at 4:40 PM no better place than that sweet space-- the land of loing!... greeat piece, daniel..wow!..huggs Daniel Turner June 17, 2016 at 4:51 PM Thank you and yes, you are correct. No place like it!

Sandra Haight June 17, 2016 at 9:55 AM I love your poem, Daniel. So much imagery your words present of all the places you've been...and then that lovely ending...the most beautiful place for you. Best wishes for the contest! Sandra Daniel Turner June 17, 2016 at 10:26 AM Thank you Mrs. Sandra. Yes I have been around some, seen and experienced things most people only see in books or on TV. I have truly been blessed. I consider your friendship one of those blessings.

Tim Smith June 17, 2016 at 8:27 AM Very lovely and colorful. There is much beauty out there DT but nothing compares to the one next to you. Does this mean you are back with your ex? Daniel Turner June 17, 2016 at 8:39 AM Hardly. My ex is just a good friend. These days my heart beats for a forbidden love who only visits in my dreams. I appreciate your continued support.

Connie Marcum Wong June 17, 2016 at 12:09 AM Oh Daniel, you managed to express the loveliness of each place with such beautiful imagery, succinctly and with such passion. Of course I also loved the way you chose to end your poem. I hope to see this a top winner! 7 ; ) Daniel Turner June 17, 2016 at 8:16 AM Thank you Connie. You comments are always so uplifting. I treasure your visits and your friendliness.