My Beautiful One - Not a Good Choice

When I fell in love with you,
I imagined that our love would take place 
between your heart and my heart,
Unfortunately, after a while,  
I figured out that it would happen

between your mind and your heart

between my mind and my heart

and between your mind and my mind

not between you and me

I think we’d better give it up
as it sounds rather scarry
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Agustin Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 3:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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