I love my children. This is my love for my daughter.
Her candle burns bright, brilliant and calm, Crossed legs and hands in the air. Palm against palm, knees to the sky, Her majestic mind flying elsewhere. An absolute tranquil, sun rays through the leaves, A mist on top of the water. She is beautiful now, for the rest of always, My beautiful magnificent daughter.
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