Manny Paras Poet Free verse

My Beaming Sanctuary

My woman’s spirited disposition
casts dreamy masculine awakenings
which offer delightful fascination---
her laughter  bestowing iridescence.
Through cycles’ darkening consequences
she provides warmhearted sanctuary—
a  lighthouse enfolding disturbances
through graceful affection, eternally.


Manny Paras  21 Sept 2014
THE LIGHTHOUSE Contest, nette onclaud
-- This was difficult but challenging!

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Samiha Zubair August 23, 2015 at 2:05 PM The power of woman no doubt is supreme

Carrie Richards September 29, 2014 at 3:16 PM I love the direction you took this. So uniquely your own !! And lovingly sweet! Congrats to you!

Nette Onclaud September 29, 2014 at 7:07 AM now this is overwhelming--to compare your woman with a lighthouse, and write it with impeccable expressions.. you made this form seem so easy!... my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats, manny!..

Brenda Meier-Hans September 28, 2014 at 2:36 PM Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Manny

Maurice Yvonne September 28, 2014 at 12:20 PM Congratulations on your first place win. You wrote an excellent poem.

Jan Allison September 28, 2014 at 6:26 AM many congrats on your win I agree it was a very challenging form:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 28, 2014 at 6:12 AM Dropping back to congratulate you, Manny

Dr.Ram Mehta September 22, 2014 at 8:55 AM Lovely take on the theme of lighthouse with nicely done poem, Manny