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My Beaming Sanctuary

My woman’s spirited disposition casts dreamy masculine awakenings which offer delightful fascination--- her laughter bestowing iridescence. Through cycles’ darkening consequences she provides warmhearted sanctuary— a lighthouse enfolding disturbances through graceful affection, eternally. Manny Paras 21 Sept 2014 THE LIGHTHOUSE Contest, nette onclaud -- This was difficult but challenging!

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Date: 8/23/2015 2:05:00 PM
The power of woman no doubt is supreme
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:16:00 PM
I love the direction you took this. So uniquely your own !! And lovingly sweet! Congrats to you!
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:07:00 AM
now this is overwhelming--to compare your woman with a lighthouse, and write it with impeccable expressions.. you made this form seem so easy!... my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats, manny!..
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Date: 9/28/2014 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Manny
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. You wrote an excellent poem.
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:26:00 AM
many congrats on your win I agree it was a very challenging form:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:12:00 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you, Manny
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Date: 9/22/2014 8:55:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme of lighthouse with nicely done poem, Manny
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