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My Ballad Is a Winged Creature

I compose a ballad in every line with the musings of you; however the ballad is a winged creature with its chirping and tweeting ventures to every part of your days also, cherishes you at dreams; while rainbows surrenders to the downpours, every verse paints the sky sparkling and obstructs the tempest___ just by the thoughts of you. Still, just because my feathered creature can't join a breeze, you simply disregard the sound of adoration melody, and you rest. -Fiakfairok

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Date: 4/18/2017 12:38:00 AM
Wonderful! It is isn't it? A winged creature. I see my poems the same way, the words I write. I often use the same description of the art of creating, so I am delighted to see someone else doing the same. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Darren White
Date: 4/18/2017 2:08:00 PM
You're very welcome :)
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Fiakfairok Zathang
Date: 4/18/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, this is actually my first time in PoetrySoup. Thanks for your welcoming :) :) :)

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