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THE BATTLE He went to fight a war Just a lad,days before ; Dismayed by what he saw, Never the same,anymore He became a sad recluse, Living backwards,his excuse; Hope for him,had no use, Trust co-twined,a fragile truce In outlook,so morose Thoughts,held to himself, Emotions,buttoned close, Private and lachrymose Inside a voice he heard, This thought,became a word; Understanding's nativity In his heart flew free Turning back,he turned around Perspective,he then found; The tunnel had a light.. Another would lead his fight re post inspired by Constance contest

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Date: 12/14/2016 2:52:00 AM
life's infinite journey expressed with passion thank you :))
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/14/2016 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Talin
Date: 12/13/2016 6:03:00 AM
Very well written Brian, A never ending battle on the ground and in the mind!! Enjoyed Best Wishes Kevin
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/13/2016 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Kevin for your kind words

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