My Ballad Form

THE BATTLE

He went to fight a war
Just a lad,days before ;
Dismayed by what he saw,
Never the same,anymore

He became a sad recluse,
Living backwards,his excuse;
Hope for him,had no use,
Trust co-twined,a fragile truce

In outlook,so morose
Thoughts,held to himself,
Emotions,buttoned close,
Private and lachrymose

Inside a voice he heard,
This thought,became a word;
Understanding's nativity
In his heart flew free

Turning back,he turned around
Perspective,he then found;
The tunnel had a light..
Another would lead his fight

re post inspired by Constance contest
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Kalishian Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:52 AM
life's infinite journey expressed with passion thank you :))
Strand Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Thank you so much Talin
Leake Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 6:03 AM
Very well written Brian, A never ending battle on the ground and in the mind!! Enjoyed Best Wishes Kevin
Strand Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Kevin for your kind words
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