Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

My Bald Spot

All things considered, today's about an “A”
Easy to please, you may think differently, you may
The welcome old sun
Is shining on everyone
OR is it my shiny bald spot lighting the day

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Patricia Cresswell August 30, 2017 at 12:36 PM Okay how am I supposed to respond to this piece. I wasn't going to mention the exceptional glow down south.But as you brought it up I feel obliged. Nice weather we're having. Patricia Cresswell August 30, 2017 at 11:07 PM i meant no harm Jack. i apologize if I hurt your feelings. Jack Ellison August 30, 2017 at 4:14 PM Now was that nice??? Cute though! Kinda late getting back to you... my apologies Miss Patricia! Love! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats August 30, 2017 at 8:22 AM Today was just a B-plus//Until the coffee got done — it's a must!//Now I am sipping//while you are tripping//on sunshine, lollipops and lust. SHINE ON JACKSON!!! Jack Ellison August 30, 2017 at 4:09 PM I LUST for coffee... up to two cups every morn! Not too bad YET! Find it stops me from overeating! (I think!!!) But it doesn't grow back hair!!! I'M A-SHINING JJ!!!

Jan Allison August 30, 2017 at 5:45 AM lol as long as the sun rises in the morning for us who cares about the lack of a few hairs - just get folks to wear sunglasses for the dazzle lol:-) hugs Jan xx Jack Ellison August 30, 2017 at 4:03 PM YUP! Wear sunglasses and stop complaining!!! LOL Good evening dear sis!!! xxx