My Baby Boy

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The moment you arrived I knew the hour that brought you here. You my newborn 
child, was going to be loved til' the ends of earth. I was twenty-one years old and
the  sun was very new.  It barely creased our hearts so aware of each other 
were we that it danced around us post-haste without a single thought to time.
Inside my little capsule of love 
you were a well wrapped dove 
cooing for attention, thereof;  
They insisted on wheeling me out, rules they said. I was so high on life 
I could probably have flown out of there with two left wings.  
They pushed me out into the sun, where you and I both shared our 
first breath, beneath an altruistic sky that shared only love.
A baby boy was born to me 
he was all my eyes could see 
I'd love him until eternity;
Time is a stopwatch that can handle, never a day goes by that I don't hold
his heart in mine. Today as I recall our 1st day I smile.  I was blessed 
with an angel that day, one that I could proudly call my son. 

Feb 24, 2023 
Sponsor	Regina McIntosh
Contest Name	It Means A Lot To Me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/25/2023 7:30:00 AM
Lovely write
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/25/2023 8:08:00 AM
Thank you for commenting
Date: 2/24/2023 6:20:00 PM
Only a mother can love this deep. So beautiful and sweet.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/25/2023 8:08:00 AM
thank you for stopping by Fin
Date: 2/24/2023 8:23:00 AM
What lovely Haibun, Vie. The birth of a child should fill us with joy and give thanks to the Creator. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/24/2023 11:08:00 AM
Thankyou dear Victor, motherhood the greatest gift of all. So is fatherhood
Date: 2/24/2023 7:59:00 AM
A love for a child never wanes, a lovely tribute to your son Vie. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/24/2023 11:08:00 AM
no Tom it never does, love goes on long after they grow up , thankyou for stopping by
Date: 2/24/2023 6:25:00 AM
Words straight from a mother's heart. Beautiful poem, Vienna.
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Date: 2/24/2023 11:07:00 AM
The birth of my son was so memorable Vijay,
Date: 2/24/2023 4:44:00 AM
- In your heart so close ... beautiful poem, Vie Rose - Best wishes in the contet - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 2/24/2023 11:07:00 AM
It was the most memorable day for me Sunshine have a great day dear friend
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