My Baby

Beautiful,smooth,so refine,
I thank GOD, the day HE made you mine,
Educated and street smart,
My baby I love you, from the depth of my heart,
Whenever I see you in my dream,
I awake, feeling so refreshed and redeem.
Over the years we have grown so close,
We have jumped every hurdle, to reach the winning post,
Sometime I pinch myself to see if this is real,
Especially when I hug you, and you warmth I feel,
Our relationship, I don't want it to end,
You are my lover,my girl,my best friend...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bass Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Good right poetry is always better when written from the heart. Nice bro and also thank you for the comment on my poem Forever Love.
Palmer Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 6:05 PM
thanks Terry
Jones Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 10:59 PM
nice poem
Palmer Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 7:17 AM
thanks Tarsha
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 9:22 PM
Sweet write. Hang on to that lady.
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June 20, 2012 at 2:23 AM
thanks Vince
Roske Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 9:22 AM
Well Said Richard! Great tribute to your relationship.
Palmer Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 9:47 AM
thanks Ann
Deeks Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 12:24 AM
this deserves a 7 ... you took the reader down one path (well me at least) assuming this was a child but eventually you revealed the lady of your adoration.. lovely write richard ty karen
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 6:13 AM
thanks Karen
Sanderson Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 7:25 AM
" AWe THis Is SWeet! Carma"
Palmer Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 9:27 AM
thanks Carma
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