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How beautiful it was in September - a winsome wind, the reverencing trees, leaves talking - this day – my autumn dream. In sunlight’s brilliancy, an autumn stroll by the sea. My sweet cherry boy; two dark eyes - windows of his soul. Butterfly kisses - no words. The hush! In a moment’s clarity, shy guy’s awakening. Autumn’s Rapture - Twilight’s eruption; the rush! Basking in moonlight feeling golden. In sun’s last glow, a very berry kiss. By all of this -ah, wanton bliss! Rocking into night - star shine; drunken moon. Helplessly, hopelessly, lost in love, wishing for time. . . that night we kissed. Seaside love - my phantom dream not to be forgotten - Take me back among the fallen leaves of rust, autumn’s breath, red sun - divine oblivion! June 15, 2017 Inspired by Laura Loo's Best Titles Poetry Contest (I chose the max - 40 titles for 40 lines)

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Date: 7/8/2017 1:37:00 PM
My cinder girl did it again!! What a rush! Lovely Andrea. Love Jannie
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Date: 7/2/2017 10:34:00 PM
I love this :) I will bet you win with it if you haven't already. I posted a new poem called Gone Fishing, I was reading short stories on my Kindle a few years ago. There was a line about fishing on Sunday from an X preacher to his son. :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 11:12:00 AM
I tried this one Andrea, but I couldn't find enough titles in my measly collection to make a coherent poem. Yours turned out beautifully.
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Date: 6/20/2017 4:48:00 AM
An impeccable beauty is this poem of yours, Andrea. Simply love it. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/19/2017 9:46:00 PM
I knew this beauty would be at the top of the list Andrea. I am honored to be in your company! I can't believe how wonderful all of these title poems are. Congratulations on your first placement! You worked really hard on yours and it shows! : )
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Date: 6/19/2017 5:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 6/19/2017 1:10:00 PM
This is great!! Wonderful job and placement :)
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Date: 6/19/2017 1:00:00 PM
Many congrats Andrea I knew this would place well for you!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/17/2017 11:59:00 PM
Andrea I don't know how you manage this did you break up some of the titles to extend into the next line? This is absolutely gorgeous ! I wanted to try this contest myself but I don't think I have the time before it closes. I am pretty sure I will be seeing this one at the top of the list! : )
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/18/2017 5:05:00 AM
I finally got my entry finished Andrea...but yours is much better. ; )
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/18/2017 12:21:00 AM
thanks so much, Connie. It was quite an endeavor. I went through hundreds of titles , writing down all the ones that were romantic and related to fall and the ocean. That took half my time right there! Yes, these are all individual titles as her rules stated. Glad you like it!
Date: 6/17/2017 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful dream of beautiful titles of poetry. Wonderfully done.
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Date: 6/17/2017 9:28:00 AM
Ah damn!...I just woke up...from a beautiful autumn dream...god bless Andrea...^WW^
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Date: 6/17/2017 8:50:00 AM
- A fun way to use the titles - This became a beautiful poem, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/17/2017 1:21:00 AM
Love these kinds of poem :)
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Date: 6/17/2017 1:00:00 AM
Your poetry is truly wonderful and enjoyable to read, thanks for sharing. The contest can be entered by anyone from any country and is international. The poems included just need to be written in English. Your entry is more? than welcome.
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Date: 6/16/2017 10:18:00 PM
Hello Andrea, this picture was begging for a poem, and you delivered with romance and the season's beauty...Great write...
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Date: 6/16/2017 8:37:00 PM
Brilliantly done Andrea. I don't know how you blended 40 titles together to create a beautiful poem ! Once again, a home run Andrea ! :)
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Date: 6/16/2017 5:43:00 PM
Autumn in New York - beautiful thought. Nice tribute to the season Please let me know what you think about my latest. Peace & Love Matthe w Anish
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Date: 6/16/2017 11:33:00 AM
Amazing Andrea...that picture is stunning
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Date: 6/16/2017 10:48:00 AM
I love yours, Andrea, beautiful combination of Autumn and love:)
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Date: 6/16/2017 9:59:00 AM
It wasn't until I reached "The hush" I realized I was reading a poem for the titles contest...really well done...good luck
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Date: 6/16/2017 8:30:00 AM
You have made this a very romantic write, Andrea. Good luck sweetie:)
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Date: 6/16/2017 7:54:00 AM
This is lovely, Andrea. For a poet so prolific as you, it must have been very difficult to choose which titles to use for this challenge.
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Date: 6/16/2017 7:53:00 AM
This feels like a metophor for making love. ;0)
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Date: 6/15/2017 10:40:00 PM
So many wonderful titles, Andrea! Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 6/15/2017 9:09:00 PM
So passionate the passion your Autumn dream. Wonderful piece Andrea...
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