My Aunt's a Shrink
My aunt wanted me to write something espeacially for her,and as much as i like original's i
prefer the second draft to this one:
Maybe she's
cool
Maybe am a favourite neice
Of a shrink of love and peace
The cream
To my fruit
Exhausted samy
Cant have the kids on mute
Pasta sauce
"It's mint,not meat"
Shopping tour in rome
In her tiny shrunken feet
Ms.Riane
A dumbfounded shrink
And her neice
Who can't attend the sink
The shivering dutch trees
And a mashamba me
Will have in her heart
Her favourite aunty
(Mashamba:A swahelli word referring to someone who is not accustomed to something
commenly known in the modern word)
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a
Premium Membership.
