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My Ashes

If my ashes were thrown in the air Do I drift away Am I in a state of consciousness Aware of my surroundings Able to feel love Am I alone, like now What will become of my soul Entanglement of the souls I’ve touched Will they all forget me Will it all be for not Will they care Will she care I feel the fabric of my soul rupturing The Unraveling of our intertwine souls The warmth becoming cold The fading of life existence with each other becomes black Dying souls, decaying away I can’t imagine life without her

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Date: 11/1/2020 3:45:00 AM
Loss is heartbreaking, and many will be able to relate to your words.. Can feel the angst and sadness in your poem..
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Paul Murray
Date: 11/1/2020 10:02:00 AM
Thank you It’s a difficult path to see the excitement of something new out of the darkness

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