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My Anxious Submarine

Well here and now, I'm gonna come clean
There'll be no mistaking exactly what I mean
I love the young ladies
Though I'm in my eighties
Waiting to do battle with my anxious submarine


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

October 27, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Tim has got it, me honestly thinks... but I won't make a comment until I talk to my shrink... Think I'll let Lady Cathie give you a wink... To what you have been referred to- using your ink... In the mean time I'll send my Rapid Response Turtle (medical)Team to explain what that viagra can do when your submarine sinks....

Tim Smith

October 26, 2015 at 12:36 PM

Deeper and deeper it sinks....rises up when she gives a winks...dips and dives.....then comes alive....there's plenty of life left, I think

Jack Ellison

October 27, 2015 at 8:09 AM

Good for at least another 20!!!!!!

Judy Konos

October 26, 2015 at 10:05 AM

explain fully the submarine part...is it that you now wear Depends , if they have those in Canada.....and if it's anything other....no need to reply....

Jack Ellison

October 27, 2015 at 8:08 AM

Sorry, there is no way I can explain what goes on in my brain! Psychologists have been trying for years! Love, Santa!!! xxx

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