My Animals

The rain pitter patters off the tin roof Like little mice scurrying the dirt looking for a meal It lulls me to sleep, into a peaceful slumber I am awakened soon by booming thunder Like the rush of a bull attempting to gore his matador Oh the crazy animals in my nature!

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James Foulk

Date: 5/15/2011 11:25:00 AM

yes i agree this was a new method of of writing a poem and a very good ideal, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on my poety and taking the time to read it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2011 1:34:00 AM

I was looking at your comments below here and I liked the word Carol chose for this one: Innovative. Yes,indeed, if it is for that animal contest, this is quite innovative! Thanks for reading Son of a Preacher Man. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2011 11:54:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today R.M. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

John Aaron Green

Date: 5/8/2011 5:44:00 PM

wonderful poem, rain does set a tone, to sleep to, lol...

Cory Long

Date: 5/8/2011 4:35:00 PM

I love when it is raining I have a tin roof too and It puts me to sleep as well. Nice write. cory