My Angels

My weary brain keeps me awake A constant fiendish fear grabs my face, Is she thirsty or is the fan too high for him, I wish I‘d rather die in every ache, Which intends to inflict you my angels! Take me and tear me apart, And bring every grief on to me, But don’t unfortunate them… A greed has taken me and All I wish is to farewell the passions, Because I want to give you the world, By little I have, by work, I have my heaven living in the next room, Lord keep them always in bloom. (*i call my momdad my angels)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 12:42:00 AM

hina nasir, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 10:12:00 PM

HINA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry

Date: 8/29/2015 3:20:00 AM

I'm back, to tell you that you're writing beautifully. Very perfectly written. I can see and feel your affection for your parents. Nice work.

Hina Nasir
Date: 9/5/2015 4:11:00 AM

SO GOOD TO have you back ... gr8 ! tnx for commenting ya hope you are doing gr8 :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/20/2015 5:41:00 AM

Wow a unique way to address n write about parents, they are our guardian angels indeed, nice of u to think of that! Thumbs up.

Hina Nasir
Date: 9/5/2015 4:12:00 AM

thanks zainb :) :)