My Angel Whos My Guide

First step, second step.
Third and then fourth.
I remember a big brother 
I tried walking towards.

You caught me in your arms
Everytime time i would fall.
Stood me back on my feet
Until i learned to walk.

You taught me how to play games. 
My favorite is football.
You picked me up then everytime i stumbled.

The day i met my wife,
You watched me fall in love.
With a woman i adore and truely do love.

You didnt catch that fall 
You knew what was best.
She makes me happy and you could clearly see that.

You only let me hit the ground 
when i needed to learn from my mistakes.
But you still have stayed right by my side 
Even in spirit to this day.

I look towards the sky
Up in the clouds very high
To still see my brother
My angel thats my guide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/7/2018 8:14:00 AM
Hi Chelci.. Good morning. I'm in the mountains with my dog (Bo) sipping on your wonderful write and a hot cup of Joe. Nature is waking up and you're bringing a delight to my senses!
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Lyric Man
Date: 7/7/2018 4:54:00 PM
I did.. delicious!
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Chelci Biggs
Date: 7/7/2018 3:26:00 PM
Well thanku sir! Drink a cup for me! :-)
Date: 7/7/2018 6:58:00 AM
Beauty of brilliant written is it's relatability and this is one of them.
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Date: 7/7/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thanku for reading reading! :-) this is one of my favorites because its so true about siblings love for one another.
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