Stephen Pennell Poet Free verse

My Angel Weeps

Your baby lies in intensive care, the sky light lets the sun shine in . 
Your angel looks down with a pensive stare and tries to fight her tears. 
The doctor checks your mum's results and it's not the news you crave. 
Your angel peeked and then starts to weep ; its not good news for her fave. 
Your soldier son has gone to war, extensive injury's his queen's reward 
Your angel's tears are as real as war, and her tears are getting too much for her to take. 
You live for years and the life pains are real, and so are your angel's tears, 
And then its time to meet your weeping angel at heavens  pearly  gates 


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Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2016 at 3:36 PM I enjoyed the way you did your poem, showing all the trials of life to make "your angel" weep. In case the judge is a stickler for spelling and stuff, you should read this again for small mistakes like that. Anyway, I love the message in this one. Stephen Pennell May 2, 2016 at 4:04 PM many thanks andrea for having a read stephen you commented on a blog re eileen there was a poem by m spangler went looking for it as it was perfect but he as left the soup :-(