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My Angel Spirit Bird Neelkanth

My Angel Spirit Bird Neelkanth                    Dedicated to Deborah Guzzi

I dreamed one day, 
I was climbing a hill,
Away, far away in the Himalayan mountain 
But I was only a beginner, of climbing a snow peak
I wanted to climb to see the world, 
To feel the Sunshine
And the beauty of the glacier

Perhaps my fascination for climbing the hills, 
Was traced by my mind, who knew me more than me
It thought to fulfill my long cherished desire,
If not in actual, at least in my dream

I wanted to feel, how splendid it is
To see the world 
From a snow covered peak  
To get a bird eye view of the world
To learn more about the earth, humans and nature

In moments of those total silence and aloofness,
I found the blue wing bird, like an Angel spirit for me
My beautiful blue bird Neelkanth,*
Was my only friend and inspiration,
To complete the mission 

I was climbing the snow covered hill
Like a Mountaineering trainee,
My tools were few, but my aim was true
My only companion, in the journey of my adventures,
Was my blue wings bird 
I know from my childhood days, as my ‘Neelkanth’*

I found my blue wings bird, hovering always near me,
Like an Angel spirit, to save me from falling,
Its beauty lies, not only in its blue wing,
But the poison it stored in its purple throat ring, 
To save the world from the effects of poison

I was climbing the hill,  
And my favorite Blue wing bird, 
Was accompanying me, in those difficult moments, 
Like a true well wisher and a true companion

At one place I found that,
The snow rocks were difficult and steep
I tried a short cut, to somehow reach the top,
And then came my Angel spirit,
From somewhere suddenly, 
Giving indication to stop immediately 

I decided to go, as the spirit was indicating, 
I changed my course, as shown by the Angel spirit
Next moment I heard a sliding of the snow rock, 
The rock which I was trying to climb,
Were falling and were slipping deep in the glacier

My eyes became tearful, when I saw my Angel spirit
It had saved my life,
From being buried in the snow glacier,
For ever and for ever

After seeing my expressions of love and gratitude, 
The bird flew away from there
Leaving me inspired for many more coming moments,
To start climbing the hills again and again

Next moment I was climbing,
The hills with more vaguer, as usual
My angel bird had given me enough
To keep trying
Till I reach my goal
Or feel the Sunshine

Ravindra

Kanpur India 30th April 2010

* Neelkanth.    Indian Roller. Neelkanth (Hindi)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 1:59 PM
well, I don't know what place you won in this contest, but I think it was exactly the kind of poem Deb had in mind when she issued this challenge! congrats. Andrea
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April 30, 2010 at 11:10 PM
Congratulations on your success Ravindra keep climbing these hills... well done....Margaret
Freeman Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations Ravindra, on your success in the competition. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 6:55 PM
With such a beautiful poem as entered in the contest...it is no surprise it has won a place of honor. Congratulations Ravindra! Well done! Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Sorry my dear friend I see u won 10th place with another poet so u enjoy your special victory today..forgive my mistake..luv.. Linda-Marie
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April 30, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Congrats Ravindra on your HM in Debbie's contest Animal Spirits .. a wonderful write and well deserved honor for this excellent poem..luv.. Linda-Marie..
A  Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 10:17 AM
U HAVE A WAY WITH BEAUTY IN YOUR WRITE, ENJOYED,,IRMA
Guzzi Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Please enter I have extended the date there are NOt 25 entries! I hope you get this in time it is so very kind of you to fit writing it in with all your work!
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