My Angel Butterfly

When Angie was a little girl, so cute and very sweet,
She tried to talk with strangers and wander in the street.
She loved to play with dollies, teddy bears and kitties.
She’d put her clothes on backwards and would still look pretty.
Problems of this harried world were farthest from her mind.
Full of love and innocence, she always was so kind.

The years passed by so quickly. Angela went to school.
She learned the world, which can be great, also can be cruel.
She went from dancing lessons, fun sleepovers and zoos
to make-up, phone calls, shopping, and wearing size 9 shoes.
In sunny California, she learned to cherish friends.
Then back again to Utah, she had to start again.

She then came to the threshold of a bright new world.
When she became a woman, butterfly wings unfurled.
She’s leaned life’s little secret, what makes life worth living:
To honor God and family. She’s loving and so giving.
She listens to her conscience and tries to do what’s right.
My angel butterfly one day to heaven will take flight.



Feb 24, 2016 for Lovely Children Poetry Contest of Laura Loo
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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Andrea, congratulations on having soooo many poems on the best new poems list. Loved this too!
Cronin Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Great poem Andrea, I enjoyed the read.
Yvonne Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Such a special poem. A Fav!
Walker Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:20 AM
Oh, Andrea this is so beautiful and what a great honor to your daughter Angela. I hope she reads this and understands how much you love her.
Konos Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations....so lovely....when they turn from caterpillar to butterfly...and me...well I'm still waiting! Cheers
Laurie Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 11:29 PM
G'day Andrea ... a warm hearted story from a proud mother - well done again - Lindsay
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading about your angel :) She has an angel for a mother... hugs
Chircop Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Lovely indeed, and a fave. You have a way of getting to me with your words dear Andrea.
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Lovely words. Congratulations!
Selfa Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your spectacular win! Keep it up and there will be more placements to come! :) _HANS
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February 27, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Most beautiful lovely memories .Congratulations on your “My Lovely Children” contest win, Andrea!!! Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:45 PM
absolutely beautiful Andrea - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:39 PM
I read this a few days ago, I thought I left a comment but nevertheless I am back to tell you what you already know. This is a beautiful poem from a loving mother about her pride and joy. She is as lucky as you to have such a loving and supportive mom. Congratulations on your winning poem. Peace to you dear Andrea:)
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Andrea, the title says it all! Congrats on your top placement in my contest and thank you for your entry! :)-luloo *smiles*
Bauer Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 2:54 PM
this is just beautiful, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
Crenshaw Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 1:04 PM
wonderful!!!! 2 thumbs up. check my new stuff if u get a chance. many blessings
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Very beautiful Andrea...love how you did this...it floats along just like the butterfly
Manassian Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Hey, you. Wonderful write about your angel butterfly. She has one fantastic Mama. Loved this, dear....The lesson that life can also be cruel is a very difficult one to learn....Hugs
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