My Angel

My angel is bound and gagged
As I still don’t listen for her
No matter what she did to warn me
I ignored and bound her some more
She can’t help me anymore
I’ve secured her in a dark room
Away from any helpful thoughts
And she is completely ignored by me
My angel has now been ruined
For she is of no help anymore
And rendered useless
She now turns to pixie dust
And floats into heaven rejected
Defeated
And with a feeling of being useless
Never will she help another soul
Her powers are gone, forever
Nothing can bring her back
She has been made worthless
What have I done?
What have I done?

Russell Sivey

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Kim Van Breda

March 9, 2014 at 2:14 PM

Shame Russell-- your poor Angel ;) Seriously though.. good metaphors and emotions behind this write. Xx~Xx

Kayod5 Kayode

March 8, 2014 at 2:52 PM

I think angels do not go permanently but can go sometimes when we do what irritate them,they return whenever they notice change in us. Never mind Russell,your angel will return soon.Good work my friend.

Tim Smith

March 8, 2014 at 11:01 AM

Wow ..Russell something totally different from you. This is truly remarkable. I love it

Lucilla Carrillo

March 8, 2014 at 11:01 AM

Gosh Russell. I like the poem, but it is so sad. You have never written anything like this. I don't think you have done anything bad. Only God can give or take powers away. Your Angel will be back. Many blessings always... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2014 at 9:31 AM

Oh ...... ....... Good heavens ... what have you done, Russell!! - My angels weep!! - A fantastic poem, but so sad. - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)