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My Alyssum

Through beads of hope I gaze
elegant strong and brave
with greens and diamond blues a mast
off her petals pearlescent dew drops lie
fragrantly guiding a watchful eye

Honeybee yellow stings of fate
absorbing every ray of baby's breath
harmoniously humming
in a wholesome milieu
shifting boundaries cast away drear

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2016

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Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/30/2016 9:44:00 AM What an asylum it is! As a gardener I would love one my friend, Tim! A seven! Login to Reply

Juli- Michelle Date: 11/29/2016 5:54:00 PM I love how there seems to be a vibrant shift in color from one stanza to the next.. amazing write. Love, Juli-Michelle Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/30/2016 9:38:00 AM Thanks Juli

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/29/2016 5:45:00 PM Jan must love this! :) Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/29/2016 5:35:00 PM Beautiful, for some reason the photo isn't showing up here! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 5:46:00 PM I just checked my phone and I couldn't see it.

Judy Ball Date: 11/29/2016 5:11:00 PM Lovely Tim. I do love my flowers . Nicely done with excellent imagery. God Bless and a seven from me. Thanks so much for the kind words on my "In My Rose Garden". JB Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 5:45:00 PM Thanks Judy

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/29/2016 2:31:00 PM just like the scent and bloom of a woman... lovely write, tim.. huggs Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 2:48:00 PM Thanks so much nette

Becca Teagan Date: 11/29/2016 2:27:00 PM This sounds like a description of a beautiful garden or a bouquet of flowers... very lovely description, Tim ~~ Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 2:48:00 PM Thanks Becca...I put the painting up that I was inspired from

Chris Green Date: 11/29/2016 2:19:00 PM Absolutely beautiful my friend. This has such a soft delicate feel to it. I really enjoyed this today. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 2:24:00 PM Thanks so much Chris

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/29/2016 2:13:00 PM Beautiful imagery Tim...Indeed . Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 2:23:00 PM Thanks Charma...it is another poem I wrote looking at my new painting...i'll try to upload a picture

Doug Vinson Date: 11/29/2016 2:00:00 PM Simply and absolutely beautiful, Tim. Literally gave me goosebumps. Cheers, Doug. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 2:21:00 PM Thanks so much Doug

Jan Allison Date: 11/29/2016 1:59:00 PM Tim this is truly beautiful description of this delicate flower. Its also called ' sweet alison':-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 2:19:00 PM Thanks Jan, I didn't know that.

Heidi Sands Date: 11/29/2016 1:14:00 PM Very nice Tim! I like it. :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2016 2:21:00 PM Thanks Heidi