Tim Smith Poet Free verse

My Alyssum

Through beads of hope I gaze
elegant strong and brave
with greens and diamond blues a mast
off her petals pearlescent dew drops lie
fragrantly guiding a watchful eye

Honeybee yellow stings of fate
absorbing every ray of baby's breath
harmoniously humming
in a wholesome milieu
shifting boundaries cast away drear

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Demetrios Trifiatis November 30, 2016 at 9:44 AM What an asylum it is! As a gardener I would love one my friend, Tim! A seven!

Juli- Michelle November 29, 2016 at 5:54 PM I love how there seems to be a vibrant shift in color from one stanza to the next.. amazing write. Love, Juli-Michelle Tim Smith November 30, 2016 at 9:38 AM Thanks Juli

Arthur Vaso November 29, 2016 at 5:45 PM Jan must love this! :)

Arthur Vaso November 29, 2016 at 5:35 PM Beautiful, for some reason the photo isn't showing up here! Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 5:46 PM I just checked my phone and I couldn't see it.

Judy Ball November 29, 2016 at 5:11 PM Lovely Tim. I do love my flowers . Nicely done with excellent imagery. God Bless and a seven from me. Thanks so much for the kind words on my "In My Rose Garden". JB Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 5:45 PM Thanks Judy

Nette Onclaud November 29, 2016 at 2:31 PM just like the scent and bloom of a woman... lovely write, tim.. huggs Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 2:48 PM Thanks so much nette

Becca Teagan November 29, 2016 at 2:27 PM This sounds like a description of a beautiful garden or a bouquet of flowers... very lovely description, Tim ~~ Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 2:48 PM Thanks Becca...I put the painting up that I was inspired from

Chris Green November 29, 2016 at 2:19 PM Absolutely beautiful my friend. This has such a soft delicate feel to it. I really enjoyed this today. Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 2:24 PM Thanks so much Chris

Charmaine Chircop November 29, 2016 at 2:13 PM Beautiful imagery Tim...Indeed . Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 2:23 PM Thanks Charma...it is another poem I wrote looking at my new painting...i'll try to upload a picture

Doug Vinson November 29, 2016 at 2:00 PM Simply and absolutely beautiful, Tim. Literally gave me goosebumps. Cheers, Doug. Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 2:21 PM Thanks so much Doug

Jan Allison November 29, 2016 at 1:59 PM Tim this is truly beautiful description of this delicate flower. Its also called ' sweet alison':-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 2:19 PM Thanks Jan, I didn't know that.

Heidi Sands November 29, 2016 at 1:14 PM Very nice Tim! I like it. :) Tim Smith November 29, 2016 at 2:21 PM Thanks Heidi