Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

My All Loneliness

strolling vacuum 
                                        Cerebellar Peduncle
                                        silent zone in mind 

                                          alone in body
                                   speaks no communication
                                         my all loneliness 



                                For Premiere Contest number 6 - Poetry Contest
                                Sponsored by: SKAT A

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Joseph May August 2, 2016 at 10:01 AM Very nicely written CP...best wishes Bl Devnath August 2, 2016 at 11:22 AM Thanks my friend for your wishes. HUGS, Cloudy poet

Harry Horsman July 31, 2016 at 8:40 AM Change of name BL, the poetry stays the same, love these.. Bl Devnath July 31, 2016 at 10:32 AM Now a days my mind is blocked and clouded, so i am cloudy my friend. Weather of my mind is no so clear, i feel. Thanks for your comment. Hugs, Cloudy Poet

Skat A July 27, 2016 at 10:37 PM Very good, Bl...I like the zone and stillness.... Enjoyed. SKAT Bl Devnath July 28, 2016 at 12:08 PM Thanks for you enjoyed this poem my friend, cloudy poet

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2016 at 5:28 PM Expressing great loneliness here, BL . Good luck in the contest Bl Devnath July 25, 2016 at 12:29 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2016 at 2:32 PM - A deep and sad feeling, my friend Bl - big hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath July 25, 2016 at 12:29 PM Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Constance La France July 23, 2016 at 8:24 PM Bl, I know this feeling of being alone , well done, 7 ~ Bl Devnath July 24, 2016 at 10:33 AM Thanks my friend for your comment and 7, bl

Madhupriya Shanmugam July 22, 2016 at 10:52 AM Goodluck Dev:) Bl Devnath July 22, 2016 at 11:19 AM Thanks for your wishing comment. It's not for contest my lovely friend. Loved always, bl