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My Agony

Simile and metaphor in my poem Substitute for an image of my agony That I feel hurt by a rift In fabric length of my soul, Widened to an unbearable chasm By the irreparable damage, Caused by the glowing wounds In the depth of my hearts. Striven I’ve in sewing together The edges between the rifts By the strongly twisted threads. But the bad stitches crafted by my hands Reveal the scratches of the deep scars That’s not hidden from others’ eyes Even after my wound hailed. Occupied I'm in Veiling this scar in the rhythm Of the poems created by My agonized hearts. *

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