My Advice

Mind not the past, not a thing can change;
You are unique, don't think it's strange.

As often as ever give love to all;
Don't be rude, that may be your fall.
Vicarious living- steer clear away
I know only you can lead the way.
Calm yourself, don't let life pass by
Every piece of advice- a hypocritical try.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 28, 2011 at 6:20 PM
this is great nice job! cory
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June 28, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Nice acrostic write with nice expressions, Beth
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