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Do you think I don't know you after all these years, Sitting so quietly as if listening with raised ears? Am I supposed to pick you up for such loving posture, And reward you with a treat to hear your happy cheer? You toppled the litter box and ran to your hideout Pretending like except you no one will find out, Emerging only when I cleaned the mess you made, Walking away like you never heard anything I said. Now you sit there as if to assure me all is well, Looking for my approval of your cute, gentle swell. I know you are scheming to ask for my forgiveness With playful moves and kisses, trusting my kindness. Yet, I see a look of determination: love me or else, As if you know how to live here without my help, Displaying cuddly charm neighbor's kids adore, Hubris in your pose says they love you even more. You left that space on sofa for me to sit next to you, So I will lift you up with a gentle hug as I always do. Stop pretending if you want to make up to me, Be yourself and run to me to sprinkle kisses of glee. First Place October 28, 2017 Picture Prompt Contest Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 7/22/2022 1:27:00 AM
Really enjoyed the special posture of your cat on the sofa ! Isn't she feeding her young one ..? An offspring from a black male cat.... her mate! Love this cute poem showing your hidden sense of humor, Vijay !
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Date: 11/9/2017 11:24:00 PM
Charming and loving - wonderful write, Vijay - congrats on the win, my friend! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 6:42:00 AM
Thanks Greg!
Date: 11/9/2017 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful and so loving. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 11/8/2017 1:53:00 PM
Your poem was a cat’s meow...Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 11/8/2017 9:10:00 AM
I get the impression you are beholden to a cat :) fabulous pen, congratulations on your win! xomo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/8/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Maureen!
Date: 10/31/2017 5:32:00 PM
Great one Vijay! I love the ending too :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 10/31/2017 3:30:00 PM
How simply adorable. You have captured this scene with affectionate good humor. I am adding this to my favs. to read again. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. You always make me feel welcome here.bHugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/31/2017 3:54:00 PM
Thank you SuZ..appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/31/2017 8:02:00 AM
A lovely, sweet poem Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2017 8:28:00 AM
Many thanks Gary!
Date: 10/31/2017 2:19:00 AM
Sweetness personified in this cute poem of yours Vijay. I really enjoyed it, I can see you are an animal lover. Good luck in the contest...Maria
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Date: 10/31/2017 6:56:00 AM
Thank you Maria!
Date: 10/30/2017 3:55:00 PM
This is SO appealing and sweet, Vijay. Janice
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Date: 10/31/2017 6:56:00 AM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 10/30/2017 1:40:00 PM
Every gesture of affection from a cat is a gift it gives to you at its whim. To love a cat takes a special temperament. You have summed it up very well in this poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2017 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Patricia!
Date: 10/30/2017 10:04:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a very independent and charming cat..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 10/30/2017 4:30:00 AM
This is too cute Vijay! I do love a good cat poem! My sister absolutely LOVES cats, but I'm more of a dog person, but I like cats too...if they are friendly! Cats can sure have an attitude, even like the one within your write here my friend! I adored your clever piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2017 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Russell--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/29/2017 10:09:00 AM
this truly IS adorable. shows such love for a cat!! They just have no understanding of how annoying they are, like when mine walks on this keyboard and I lose everything I have been typing!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2017 11:15:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea!
Date: 10/29/2017 8:04:00 AM
This is very sweet Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 10/29/2017 4:52:00 AM
A lovely poem about this lovely cat, really enjoyed this Vijay, GL in contest my friend. :))
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Date: 10/29/2017 6:17:00 AM
Thank you Roy!
Date: 10/28/2017 10:02:00 PM
Sweet interpretation Vijay, best wishes...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2017 6:17:00 AM
Thank you Charlie!
Date: 10/28/2017 8:19:00 PM
A lovely write Vijay..best wishes
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 10/28/2017 6:06:00 PM
what a cute interpretation of the picture Vijay, good luck in the contest with your lovely rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Jan--appreciate your visit and comments!

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