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My Adorable Cat

Do you think I don't know you after all these years,
Sitting so quietly as if listening with raised ears?
Am I supposed to pick you up for such loving posture,
And reward you with a treat to hear your happy cheer?

You toppled the litter box and ran to your hideout
Pretending like except you no one will find out,
Emerging only when I cleaned the mess you made,
Walking away like you never heard anything I said.

Now you sit there as if to assure me all is well,
Looking for my approval of your cute, gentle swell.
I know you are scheming to ask for my forgiveness
With playful moves and kisses, trusting my kindness.

Yet, I see a look of determination: love me or else,
As if you know how to live here without my help,
Displaying cuddly charm neighbor's kids adore,
Hubris in your pose says they love you even more.

You left that space on sofa for me to sit next to you,
So I will lift you up with a gentle hug as I always do.
Stop pretending if you want to make up to me,
Be yourself and run to me to sprinkle kisses of glee.

First Place
October 28, 2017
Picture Prompt Contest
Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 1:27 AM
Really enjoyed the special posture of your cat on the sofa ! Isn't she feeding her young one ..? An offspring from a black male cat.... her mate! Love this cute poem showing your hidden sense of humor, Vijay !
Barden Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 11:24 PM
Charming and loving - wonderful write, Vijay - congrats on the win, my friend! :-)
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Thanks Greg!
Schiavina Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Beautiful and so loving. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Frances!
Kendrick Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Your poem was a cat’s meow...Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
Pandit Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 2:01 PM
Thanks Sara!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 9:10 AM
I get the impression you are beholden to a cat :) fabulous pen, congratulations on your win! xomo
Pandit Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Thanks Maureen!
Sands Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 5:32 PM
Great one Vijay! I love the ending too :)
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Delaney Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 3:30 PM
How simply adorable. You have captured this scene with affectionate good humor. I am adding this to my favs. to read again. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. You always make me feel welcome here.bHugs, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 3:54 PM
Thank you SuZ..appreciate your comments!
Smith Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 8:02 AM
A lovely, sweet poem Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Many thanks Gary!
Williams Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 2:19 AM
Sweetness personified in this cute poem of yours Vijay. I really enjoyed it, I can see you are an animal lover. Good luck in the contest...Maria
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Maria!
Canerdy Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 3:55 PM
This is SO appealing and sweet, Vijay. Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Janice!
Cresswell Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 1:40 PM
Every gesture of affection from a cat is a gift it gives to you at its whim. To love a cat takes a special temperament. You have summed it up very well in this poem.
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Patricia!
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a very independent and charming cat..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Thank you Sara!
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October 30, 2017 at 4:30 AM
This is too cute Vijay! I do love a good cat poem! My sister absolutely LOVES cats, but I'm more of a dog person, but I like cats too...if they are friendly! Cats can sure have an attitude, even like the one within your write here my friend! I adored your clever piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:44 AM
Thank you Russell--appreciate your comments!
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 10:09 AM
this truly IS adorable. shows such love for a cat!! They just have no understanding of how annoying they are, like when mine walks on this keyboard and I lose everything I have been typing!!
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Many thanks Andrea!
One Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 8:04 AM
This is very sweet Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Pett Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 4:52 AM
A lovely poem about this lovely cat, really enjoyed this Vijay, GL in contest my friend. :))
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Thank you Roy!
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 10:02 PM
Sweet interpretation Vijay, best wishes...
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Thank you Charlie!
May Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 8:19 PM
A lovely write Vijay..best wishes
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 6:06 PM
what a cute interpretation of the picture Vijay, good luck in the contest with your lovely rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Thank you Jan--appreciate your visit and comments!
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