My Addiction

When I wake up every morning,
when sun rays kiss my skin,
When flowers bloom in the field,
Sending my spirit  into bliss.

You're like a rolling stone in my head,
Taking my emotion 'til I can hardly breathe.
The sensational feeling travels through my veins,
causes me an exultant happinesss.

You are my addiction,
my morphin when in pain.
my stimulator when I'm weak,
The only reason why I breathe.

How I wish one day you came,
and imagination became real,
'Cos tonight I keep on looking up,
Only stars and moon replies back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/19/2022 6:49:00 PM
Maybe what you look for outside of you, is within you, Aiyah
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Date: 7/19/2022 4:54:00 PM
Good poem. My addiction wasn't so nice.
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:45:00 AM
You know, Aiyah? This reminds me of a recurring theme I once had in my older works. Long ago I just gazed on the night sky waiting for my wish to be granted. Since this is a chronicle of how you were, I wonder how a sequel to this piece will sound if one was written today. :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/23/2014 7:35:00 AM
sorry... come again?! hehe... oh yeah.. bright idea!!! ..some of our soupers are doing collaboration... do you think it'll be a great idea if we come up w/ one ?.. soupmail me if you have plan.. :O)) Thanks sweet guy!! ^__^
Date: 12/24/2013 8:07:00 AM
This is a very wonderful poem It actually reminds me of one of my own favorite poems called Wish. Great work and Maligayang Pasko.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/24/2013 10:33:00 AM
Maligayang Pasko, Wayland.. ! thanks for a very warm comment... :').. AiyaH ^_^
Date: 12/2/2013 6:42:00 PM
Aivah, great job!! creative beauty of imagination!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/3/2013 3:22:00 PM
thanks for a delightful comment,Chuck!! ,,,it makes my heart celebrate so much... :') ,,,more huggs from one Filipina.. :)
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