My

My

My back is breaking.
My heart is aching.

Everyone thinks I am faking.
BUT I am not mistaking.

My whole world is awaiting.
While I am hesitating.

Nothing to be debating.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Janko Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Dear John, a cute little poem! Enjoyed. Betty
Hardison Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 7:41 PM
'Thought I had acknowledge your comment on my Poem 'My' long before this. One of my gems. Sorry for the over looking. Glad you enjoyed it. Peace, Love and Joy.
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Well written ...
Hardison Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Thank Much for your comment. With aging hesitating seem the wiser route. Have a great weekend. Peace, Love and Joy.
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