My 5 Senses

For A moment be me

If for just one moment 
You could be me
Look upon yourself
Then you’d see

You’d understand your value
Your worth you’d know 
If you felt my heart
You’d feel my love grow

I’ve never put my senses
On something quite like you
If you had my eyes
You’d see it too

The touch of your body 
It brings me alive
Your perfect form
It must be explored with the senses five

If you were me
You’d feel the fire as I taste your lips
You’d know the inferno
As I pulled you close while holding your hips

Your skin deep beauty
It drives me insane
But to sit and listen to you
You’d understand there’s much more to gain

If from my view you saw your eyes
Set upon me, you’d know how it felt
You’d see that your gaze 
It humbles me and makes my soul melt

The scent of your hair
As you hug me tight and close
Those quiet intimate moments
Are the ones I love the most

With my ears
You’d hear the three most beautiful words
When you say, “I love You”
They’re the most beautiful words I’ve ever heard

You couldn’t help but smile as we lay and dream
Coming from your mouth
They are less impossible
Than they seem

To see you as I do,  you’d understand
In each perceived flaw
I find perfection
It is your beauty I saw

My one in ten billion find
My best friend
I’d marry you in an instant
I’d be yours till the end

Yes, if you were me 
And experienced all the things that make you you
You’d finally get it
You’d understand your beauty too

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Date: 8/21/2018 3:12:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/27/2018 11:58:00 AM
Creative Masterpiece!!
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Date: 7/26/2018 12:38:00 PM
How beautiful! What an interesting concept too - to temporarily change places and perspectives!
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